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for The Arrangement

by Maldoror

person Mia
schedule August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YIPPIE!!!! *does a dance* yay! I've been checking up on the story constantly for the last few days- waiting for the BRILLIANT continuation^__^ You ROCK! I could never hope to live up to your killer writting style, and I don't think it would do you justice if I tried. So here I am with my somewhat lacking writter skills, but you are my little hero^__^ This is seriously BES BEST 1X5 fics that I've read so far. And you little tease*mock glare and huffs comically* I thought Fei was gonna get some. Lol, but yay, he get some next time! *evil cackles* I loooooooooved the touch with the red guppies... and the adult course....*sigh* I scared the lawn workers next door with my sudden outburst of laughter^__^ You effect us all- Mai
person Rei Schneider
schedule August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
o.O This is gettin' better & better!!!
I'm sooooo glad because you updated, "The Arrengement" is my addiction!!!! XDDDDD
.....Wufei wants to get laid.... does Heero wants to get laid too??? ^__^ I think bof thf them need some action *hentai grin* ne?
person amaryllis
schedule August 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*THWAP*


(last two chapters were great, by the way. Everything made sense in the last part of 'Breaking Storm' and this last chapter was a great portrayal of how Wufei would react. Really anticipating the next chapter!! ^_^)
person Mia
schedule August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm getting the feeling here that Wufei is just an idiot and Heero's already started on the path of something more than a simple 'arrangement' and is waiting for Wufei to finally catch up and take notice. Awwww, poor Heero *lol* I find myself thinking Yuy the shy schoolgirl trying to get the blockheaded adorable Wu-man to fially ask him out or something *snorts*. That's just a small thought... Oh, and Wufei IS an idiot. I'm ashamed to say that one of my fav. characters in this show isn't more in tune with himself. But I LOVE your story! *kisses author:SMOOCHIEZ!!!!* One of the best I've read in a looooong time!
Oh, one more thing- MORE SEX. Sorry, but really, it's NC-17 for a reason. Get those boys on the mat for some hard grie^__e^____^ .........or are you gonna make Fei beg for it....O.O oooooooooooooooooooooooh.
person nozomi
schedule August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aarrrrrggggg!! poor wufei!! he's got to be soo frustrated! I know i would be...and i don't just mean sexually. to have someone watching you like that....
and i'm still interested after 35 chapters. that definitely makes you a great author in my book. most can't hold my attention that long. I can't wait for more!
person blxie1xie13
schedule August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
poor e ite it must have felt like he culdent trust anything even his mind and for some who has that muchj controll over them sevls that must be the worst part. now lets see if im right heero somhow kows what wufie said and dosent know what to make of it he now has to come to term with some of his own feelings. he wahces him to see how this information affects there relationship. so how far of am i. thanks for the brain bending chapter cant wait for the next update.
person Kagero
schedule August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Help! I need an intervention!m com completely addicted to this fic. The characterizations are right on, the plot(s) kick ass and the sex scenes are hot, hot, hot. The strenght and depth of the characters are facinating and seems to keep more to their origineteretermination, rather than broken and beaten down as in some fics. Not to diss anyone else's fics, those are interesting to, it's just that Maldoror's 'The Arrangement' leaves you with a feeling of "Woohoo, that kicked ass" instead of "Aww, mean people suck." Maldoror, your hard work is appreciated and very much enjoyed! Thank you!
person crystal
schedule August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Darn yes, they need someone there at all times to translate their "body language" to each other. @_@''
person Sally Mishima
schedule August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes! I loved Breaking Storm. I can imagine the challenges you went through to write it, but I'm glad you did! I'm also very glad Wufei wasn't actually going insane, a concern I had at one point. Maybe some headway will finally be made in their relationship. I think it would be sweet if Heero made the first (affectionate) move, even if it doesn't happen for awhile, and, of course, more Heero POV.
person Mu Ring
schedule August 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Superb. Just... superb. I've yet to find an author who can write *anything* so spectacularly, let alone 1x5x1. The next few weeks until the next chapter cannot come quickly enough.

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