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for The Arrangement

by Maldoror

person Rei Schneider
schedule August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
o.O .... u upload cha chapters .... o.O
I liked the 3 chapters that u uploaded but I absolutely loved the last chapter!
I like how things are evolutionating ...Will Quatre talk to Heero about what he just found out?
...you tortured Wufei a lot but... it worth it ^__^
Last thing I have to say: You are an awesome writer!!!
person PhoenixMageFire
schedule August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow
Never has a crazy man been so rational. But still... *sob* It\'s so achingly beautiful that Fei-kun would give up his hope of salvation just to be near Heero. I simultainiously want to smack him upside the head, and bake lots of chocolate chip cookies.
But how could he make things \"normal\" again?
person Chiaki Dark
schedule August 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Let me just say, that when I first read the summary and notes to this fic of yours, I was a bit weary of it. I am, you see, a romantic at heart and Angst & Co. really ta bea beating on me. *laughs* But the sheer language and style of your fic drew me in and I\'ve been returning, dedicatedly I might add, every week to check up on \"The Arrangement.\" Ironically eno I\' I\'ve fallen in love with this \"unromantic\" story of yours.

And this latest chapter-wow. I appreciate you taking the time to write this right. Otherwise, it might not have fit so well as it does. I guess I can only wait with baited breath on the outcome of the recent turn of events, and acknowledgment, at least on Wufei\'s behalf, of his feelings. And what of Heero? I do wonder what goes on in that head of his-or rather, his heart.

Again, this is a wonderful, unromantic, story that has stolen my heart. Please continue the great work.
person Race
schedule August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I read the chapter over again and I cried again. You make it so easy to really hurt for Wufei, even if he\'s the one who\'s too blind to see how much Heero loves him. What made Quatre leave? Did he hear Heero come in? Or go call Heero to get his rear end home?
The saddest, sweetest bit was when Wufei was smiling at Quatre and telling him no, they wouldn\'t be talking about it tomorrow. Or ever again, I suspect, unless they get more drugs.

person Honeykissfire
schedule August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent work on the Breaking Storm part of your story! Well worth the wait. ^_^
person Race
schedule July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It gets worse? Wufei isingsing his mind and it get worse?? Well, you know I\'m along for the ride, but I admit I\'m scared.
You do the dreams so well. They have just enough of that hyper real feel to them to make them dreamy and still hard to distinguish from the waking world. The worst nightmares are the ones in which you dream you are awake after a bad dream and the horrors continue. Wufei certainly has issues, which is perfectly logical, considering. What is sad is his longing for Heero to love him. I think you show very well in the \"real\" world that Heero does love Wufei to the best of his ability. Poor Wufei has painted himself into this corner with his pretense that he\'s not gay and doesn\'t like the sex. What they really need is Duo or Quatre to come in and mediate. \"Hi, I\'m your certified silent stoic pilot translator. Heero, let\'s start with you...\"
person PhoenixMare��re
schedule July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Considering this is a rather dark fic, is it strange that my spirits lift you when post a new chapter?
It was only a matter of time, really. Wlhen a person like Wufei uses their intellect to view the world the way they want to, eventually what they\'ve purposely ignored comes back to bite them in the ass. And he does have a lot of IQ to go crazy with -_-;
But that all is why I love him.
person Honeykissfire
schedule July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I LOVE this story! I haven\'t come across a story in a good while that\'s kept my attention like this. Normally, I stay away from stories with more than 12 chapters but once I started this one, I couldn\'t wait to find out what happens next. It has a realness that I like to read in fanfiction, or in any type of fiction really. Keep up the good work! ^_^
person bluepixie13
schedule July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh you poor dear (offers you a pillow) thankyou so much for that wonderfull chapter very much in character as always. kept me in pens and needls as always. gave me shiver. you may update slow as gumbo but it like my dad said about cooking the best stuff takes time so take as long as you need as far as im concern.
person JadeBlade
schedule July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, guess I wasn\'t quite done ranting with that last comment. Anyway, I also wanted to point out that I like all the oril chl characters you have in this story, too. Like Foxwood. Can\'t help but like him. ^_^ I\'m really looking forward to seeing what happens next! Poor Wufei. He has to suck it up and actually let someone else take care of him! Sucks for him, but it\'s oh so entertaining for the readers. X3 ...I\'m actually looking forward to the angsty-ness...does that make me a bad person? O.o;; Write more! I\'m all stoked about the next chapter! XD!

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