rate_review Reviews

Wow. This story is addictive! Not only does it have everything I like in a story, but it\'s also incredibly well written! It\'s also probably the most in-character Gundam Wing fanfiction I\'ve ever seen. I love everything about it. I especially love all the little details and references. Like the JLA reference. That was so perfect. *sigh* Good ol\' Justice League...actually, I think I have the T-shirt you described...<_<;;; I liked Hees shs shirt, too. I can just picture him wearing it. It\'s so wrong it\'s almost right. ^_^;;

*laughs* Une knows! Is it going to affect her dealing w/ them?
Did Heero really decide to keep the same house b/c he heard Wufei refer to it as home...things have really changed.

Ok, I\'m a sap and I love the idea of Heero taking care of Wufei. In many ways, he\'s been taking care of Wufei for years. I adored the scene with Une... I suspect Heero\'s definition of partner included the \"arrangement\" that Une finally clued into and that his confusion was not that he wasn\'t getting the fact that Une was asking about them as a \"couple\" but that Heero had always thought it was obvious.
My favorite part of this fic is Wufei\'s point of view, and how he just can\'t bring himself to believe that he loves Heero, or that Heero could love him.
I wonder, is the refusal to sell the house because of Wufei calling it \"home\"?

::gathers kleenex and braces herself for the next chapters.::

yay you updated and it wwas good cant wait for the next part.

So I\'m guessing that after this section they will begin working on changing their arrangement?

Another wonderful chapter. I admire the way you handle the action scenes so much. Always from the tight point of view that gives the fic a edgy, realistic feel, and yet very clear on what\'s happening, so that the scene plays out like a movie in my mind\'s eye. Wonderful work.

And for the details, I loved the tee shirts, Wufei walking into the pillar, Heero in the Ladies\' Dressing room, poor Wufei getting hit by the car. Someday, some day, those boys will wake up and smell the romance, won\'t they?

And I didn\'t review the Nash chapters due to technical difficulties, but they were wonderful. I think you have Trowa dead on, and his fear and loathing of Nash and the others was perfect. I\'m glad he has Quatre and Duo, too.

Wow...

I really like the description and the way you make things flow when writing about a mission, especially with how it isn\'t rushed or over too quickly. This chapter was a really, really great example of that.

Unfortunately, the semi-cliffhanger is...TORTURE. *sobs and mopes until the next chapter comes out*

-amaryllis

Damn! Why are the sexy, intelligent, sexy ones gay or otherwise unabtainable!?

this fic rox. like totally. love the way you write from wufei\'s pov and how you keep the characters IN character. this rox. update soon! =D

Hello.

I would just like to say that I love the way you write. I have readr fir fics on the raygun site, and I think your stories are excellent. I like the accurate way you protray Heero and WuFei in your story.