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for The Arrangement

by Maldoror

person kira
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for another great chapter of great story ^___^ Heero\'s actions are screeming with something more than their arrangement contains, but Wufei is so unaware... good that he starts to see his own emotions, even if he minimize them. I\'m glad that you\'ll soon write the part from Heero\'s poin of view, and I hope for bit of lemon too ^________^ I\'m also happy than you didn\'t leave Trowa alone... hmm... threesome, I like it!
person untidyclaws
schedule June 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Uhh...I really dun have much to say, but I wanted to point out that I\'m reading your story and I care enough to leave a review, even if it doesn\'t say anything useful. :) ZaiJian!
person rei_schneider
schedule June 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I thought they would get together in the last chapter.... but it would be too easy! XDDD Those guys are VERY stubborn. I like A LOT your story, and I find it very interesting, what will happen with the 3 ex-gundam pilots? I want lemon!!! because: 1. I love the way you make that scenes 2. I love those two doin\' \"things\"and 3. ..... yeah, I\'m a pervert XDDDD
person Race
schedule June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I admit I was as disappointed as Wufie that he and Heero didn\'t get to play house. Although, honestly, I couldn\'t see any good coming from it. Great action scenes as always. I love this fic and the wonderful job you\'ve done on Wufei\'s sweet helpless cluelessness.
Hey! Didn\'t Duo warn them about Althea? Why wasn\'t anything done?
person GoldenRat
schedule June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit part three was kinda anticlimatic. But it sounds like Preventer security, pretty much isn\'t.
person Rei Schneider
schedule June 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
RAMMSTEIN!!! ........ XDDD well, I just wanna tell u that your story is awesome. I just found it yesterday and I couldn\'t stop reading it! Hope you can update soon, I can\'t wait to read what will happen ^^
person Dancing wolf
schedule June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey.
I just wanted to tell you how much i love your y, iy, it is truely a work of art. You blend humour, action, sex, character development, and a se toe touch of angst wonderfully. You are amazingly talanted!
This is actually the first GW fic i\'ve read on AFF.net, so far i\'ve just been looking around FF.net, where i write, and i stumbled across the link. Now i\'m so glad i did. I love the way you write Wufei, i\'ve been attempting him myself and he is bloody difficult to write! I have a fascination with complex characters and the way you wrote him was/is simply perfect.
I haven\'t finished reading the last chapter yet, so i\'m gonna head off and do that now i hope you update this soon i can\'t wait to see how you conclude this story, hopefully there will be a sequal, ne?
Oops, brother is yelling for the computer, gotta run.
Later.
(ps. please excuse spelling mistakes, my spelling is atrocious i know)
person amaryllis
schedule June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Final part next chapter, or did I get it in the wrong context? I hope there\'s a sequel...T_T

And I think I get the song. Brothers-in-arms. ;)

person GoldenRat
schedule June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That is hot. I\'m guessing it definately caught Exeter\'s attention but fast. Are they invited in already? That doesn\'t seem very likely.
person amaryllis
schedule June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m normally a 1x2, 3x4, keep-with-the-masses reader when it comes to Gundam Wing, which is why I avoided reading this fic for awhile. But this story just kept coming up on the screen when browsing, because of all the good and speedy updates, and I finally clicked on it. I was so drawn in by the second chapter that I closed every other window on my computer and spent a good amount of time catching up. I was halfway througfiltfiltration II last night when I called it quits, having read the last five chapters consecutively and also because I was reluctant to wait fhe nhe next update after finishing. When I came back from class today, lo and behold, there was another chapter! XD

Anyway, after finishing the whole thing, I\'d like to compliment on your characterization, among (many) other things. Heero and Wufei are both very much in character (which is really hard for most authors) throughout the whole story, and the consistency they keep along with the storyline is excellent. The background research with the plot is also very well done, with all the military concepts and the guns and practically everything about Wufei. o-o

In conclusion to this fangirl rant,

PLZ UPDATE!!11!

-amaryllis


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