rate_review Reviews

This fic is flipping AWESOME!!
Do you have any idea how long I\'ve waited to read a really GOOD WuFei POV?

Maldoror,
I\'m afraid I can\'t offer you a great deal of help in writing \'The Arrangement,\' but I do hope to give you some encouragement. This story you\'re writing I believe is very good, and is one I immediately go to when I see it\'s been updated. Your protrayal of Wufei and Heero are, in my mind, quite believeable. I\'ve attempted to see a story through Wufei\'s eyes and I admit, it\'s quite difficult. I\'m glad, however, that you haven\'t decide hav have him blabber on about justice, as many lesser authors stereotypically potray him. I say to you bravo and I do expect more for this story.

As for constructive criticism, I\'m afraid I\'m bad at offering that. I either love a story or hate it, and so I can\'t easily find flaws with it. However, I do want to see Heero\'s POV, hopefully an entire chapter of it.

I hope this helped boost your muse. Again, thank you for the story.

Sally Mishima

::whimper:: This story has officially gone beyond my ability to review it. It would be like...like... reviewing Ernest Hemmingway or Robert Frost. You use of sensory imput is beyond perfect. Descriptions and action are perfectly balanced, and the overarcthemthemes continue to be sustained in the smallest nuances. Even the details, like the well-thought-out chapter titles, are a work of art. The quotes which begin each chapter add to the richness of the story. And the literary tags, woven through a tapestry of repetition are suberb. \"Breathe. In. Out. Now.\" I can\'t even be jealous, all I can do is read in sincere awe and wait in breathless anticipation for a new chapter.

It was great! To bad Wu-chan didnt join the preventers? What is he going to do? Where will he go?

I loved it. Where do you get theses ideas?? They are so orginal!!! Hvae you ever thought about making your own story and having your own characters? I think you should. Your so great!

Ohhh I wonder whats going to happen!!! I Just love this story!! Oh yeah now I remember! I was on mediaminer.org and I saw that you had so mucorieories!! And you had that one-shot fic with Heero and Wufei!! That is so evil *cries*

God, that was intense. This whole fic has been absolutely incredible heading from one great self-discovering high to the next!

Why is Duo sooo flirty?? Lol though I like him like that! I love the way Heero rescued them!!

Why is Duo sooo flirty?? Lol though I like him like that! I love the way Heero rescued them!!

Finally! I thought it was so cute that Wufei was embarrassed because of his inexperience!! I love this story!!