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by Camaro

person anz
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic, but please....UPDATE...soon.

Vegeta is there with Goku in spirit...The strength he needs for the final battle!
person Serenity
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
a really nice yet dark fic i like it very much, the monster inside his mind is forever his, even if he erase it form his mind the imprint is always there so nothing is ever really forgotten.
person Shadowsoulmaster
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the greatest stories ever made. I would recomend this to everyone. Great job Camaro, keep up the great work.

Loyal Follower 426....aka Shadow, lol.
person Kelly
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m not gonna fuck with you! Oh man you kick ass!
person Patricia
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn, you are a great writer. What a truly awesome story. Thank you!! The first few chapters scared the crap out of me. ( oh, but what fun ) YOU KNOW YOUR INSANE, YES??!!!
person Kathryn
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
excellent chapter........I\'m dying to read the rest of this story!!!!!
person Macha
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
After all that \'talk\' Satan\'s been doing to try to convince Goku to give in or give up.... *GRINS* YAY, the battles about to start.

I really love the way you discribed the new power Kakarot has attained. Still not certain where it\'s coming from, but I have a fairly good idea, I think.

Hmmmm, Vegeta couldn\'t wait in hell for this, had to come and see it with his own eyes, eh?

I\'ll be waiting for your next update.
person Saiyajin-Neko
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooh!! So cool, I wish I could see all that stuff, your description of it all is really well done. I hope that Goku can stop Satan and make everything allright again. ^_^

Can\'t wait till the next chapter, Ja ne!
person Kugatsu
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*blinks* i\'ll be back to see satan get his ass handed to him.
person Obiotaku16
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice story. I\'m extremely impressed at your writing style and the attitude you give people. I support you in every way.

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