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As always, you produce an outstanding chapter.....i can\'t wait for more

NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!! T_T Oh my....Now what? How on earth is Goku gonna get out of this? It\'s impossible really...it seems. Unless the Devil gives up, lol. which is unlikely.

Can\'t wait till the next chapter hun, Ja ne!

ack! that\'s all?! *suffers from withdrawl*

Can I have a t-shirt made with this emblazoned on it:

“Never regret what you are,” he whispered, his lips still molded to mine. His eyes looked directly into my own. “Because good, evil, happy, sad, brave or scared, I wouldn’t want you any other way. You’re mine, Kakarot. You’ve always been mine. You’ll always be mine.”



Powerful stuff yet again, my friend. I\'m only just finished with chapter 20. Part of me wants to say what the heck and sit here all night reading the rest of it. But then part of me wants to savor it as I would penne in a red sauce seasoned with roasted red peppers and garlic, sprinkled with a healthy portion of parmesan, a glass of chardonay on the side.... mmmmm.. So, I\'m going to take my time with this, because it is that delicious.

Jana (Dharmaserenity)

Chapter 17

I love this chapter I think the most so far. I loved how you got inside their heads, even more so than before. When Goku says to Vegeta, \"How can I ever love you?\" and Vegeta\'s reaction to it, plus the discussion at the party afterwards, it was all so, I don\'t know, insightful, intuitive, voyeuristic, raw, passionate and at the same time cold, fickle, hateful. Wonderful. I\'m in awe with each new chapter I read.

Jana (dharmaserenity)

This is such an amazing story, Camaro. Two moments of beauty in chapter 15, the description of Bulma as she slept and then of Chi Chi as she told Gohan to spell love, as she looked up at Goku.

*speechless*

Jana

Great chapter as always. But I have to say this story is
getting weirder and weirder. With Vegeta as the devil
or however and Goku being the innocent bystander. Unique
to say the least. When\'s the next chapter coming up?

Oh and I found out who you were talking about. That Chayron
person right? I left them a review if you wanna check it out. I
know it wasn\'t necessary but I read what she said and just had to.

email me.

Great chapter as always. But I have to say this story is
getting weirder and weirder. With Vegeta as the devil
or however and Goku being the innocent bystander. Unique
to say the least. When\'s the next chapter coming up?

Oh and I found out who you were talking about. That Chayron
person right? I left them a review if you wanna check it out. I
know it wasn\'t necessary but I read what she said and just had to.

email me.

I admier your stuborness and the \"mess with me and I\'ll kill you\" additude I to am this way and for these reasons I have desided to give you this review.

Ok, I have to come up for air briefly, hence my review. I just finished reading chapter 3... My God, Vegeta is palpable sex and danger. And Goku is like this bag of flesh that responds to any tiny pulse from that hard Saiyan Prince body. I\'m riveted!

This is just arrrraggagtfgah! I may want to bark at the moon any moment now... it is just so naked, raw, pure abandonment.

I need some water... LOL Anything to quiet my pulse at this point.

Jana (Dharmaserenity)