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Well, I am going to treat each post as a seperate chapter. Oh, and it looks great. :)

Hmmmm, *scratches chin* So, what Zarbon says may be true, Satan has unlimited power, but apparently he doesn\'t have unlimited concentration, otherwise, Goku wouldn\'t be able to see Vegeta\'s soul form, or Zarbon for who they really are.

huh, I thought Goku already knew that the devil had Bulma. *shrugs* Ah well, he certainly does now. Not that kicking himself is going to help get her back.

I am glad someone has been thinking (Zarbon) I\'d hate to see Goku going into battle thinking he can do the fusion dance with Vegeta, only to find out THAT\'s not going to work. hehe lol, BABA, ah, what a smart little witch she is.

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaahhhhhhhhhhh.... Okay, so for the last part of this chapter first, because that\'s what shocked me the most about it. Nah, I already knew what Amazons did and why they did it. The part that shocked me is that Goku just seemingly knelt there and let it happen. I have to think he was under some sort of thrall not to be able to move. Other wise he would have been able to do more than just reach a hand out. He could have made it over there to cotarize (excuse the spelling) the wound with his ki.

Crap, Vegeta and Zarbon aren\'t there any more. And although they didn\'t seem to be much help, even a peanut gallery would have been some sort of comfort for Goku.

Silly, silly Satan. He does realize that a church is just an ideal, (or idol) and not really the house of God, doesn\'t he? Certainly a tool to be used and toted about if you are trying to teach or intimidate the human mind, because we really are so simple minded as to need such phyiscal things to understand simple, and yet foreign, concepts.

No, Bruder (I am making a huge assumption here) isn\'t there Goku, His home is some where else.

Update soon Camaro!!!

I like it so far even though so far is 33 chaps! ^w^ keep it up if you can!!!

THis is FUCKING AWSEOME!!!! When are you gunna update though I\'m getting pissed! You take fucking forever to update

Plz PLZ update soon! Its been a long time!


Sue

Hey,
I have no idea how to fix the problem, but I loved the chapter!! Your story is worth scrolling across the page every few seconds and driving your eyes insane. Just wanted to let you know that, in case you don\'t get the problem fixed, let people read it anyway!! Love your writing, can\'t wait for the next one!!
~Kat

Stop toying with our emotions and UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE. I dont want to have to resort to violence

Where\'s chapter 33 it was just up? Did you delete it?

If this story isn\'t a total mind fuck, I don\'t know what is. Good job, despite a few proofreading errors here and there. And Vejita\'s changes over the years could have been questioned a bit more. Other than that, this is well written and deeply thought out to the point where I almost could have believed the \"philosophy of sin,\" we shall say, myself. I was so relieved when Bruder came along to assure me that thorough anarchy is indeed not the way to go. And, yes, I agree it\'s nice for a change to read a story with yaoi that does not revolve entirely around sex and it not about *true* ooshy-gooshy love. Refreshing... in a completely disturbing way. Which reminds me to compliment all your gruesome gory scenes, which were truly horrifying. So... uh... I\'ll wait for the next part. Yup.

O_O Nyah, I never expected this, the devil is so madly crazy about Goku. And who could blame him, really? Not me, thats for sure. XD Really great chapter, I can\'t wait for the next one...Ja ne!