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And yet another interesting turn of events. You never cease to surprise me.

After reading a shit load of stories were I was nearly bored to tears because of the curse of knowing exactly where they were heading, I fall on my knees in thanks for this fic. Its taking so many twists and turns that I hardly know which way is up anymore. And I thank you again for that. You have no idea how much.

I am entranced by this fic, the emotions that you portrey so easily would make even the most hard hearted weep. I like the realization process that Goku must endure, makes him seem more life like rather than the cardboard characters and mediocer stage directions that one finds in most stories now a days. I love your stories for the hidden meanings that I take away with me after reading a chapter, that is a sign of true talent.

You are truly an inspiration to every author out there who is trying to make his/her mark on the writing scene.

I love you Camaro and am humbled by the class and attitude that you display.

Well this chapter certainly explaind a lot of things about the Vegeta we\'ve been seeing, or should I say the devil we\'ve been reading about.

I believe if the REAL Vegeta had had the strength, he would have killed Goku. Having to watch the third class take his \'wife\' had to suck.

Now, as for what Zarbon had to say. I think it is possible that the impostor can love. If he can be so jealous of us, there has to be a reason for there to have been jealousy in the first place.

AAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh, Yes, with the things he has managed to get Goku to indulge in, he could take Goku back to hell with him without contest... maybe.

Hmmmm, I have to wonder why the real Vegeta would want to have half of hell.

Update!!

Hello,
Sorry, if there are some mistakes. I\'m not very good at the English language.

So, about the fic itself:
it was bad…for my eyes. You see, as I don\'t have access to the Internet, except nazistic library, I couldn\'t get to your \'Monster\'. I had to go to Internet café and copy each chapter to my Floppy. As I started to read the twelfth chapter (so much I have already read earlier) I couldn\'t tear my poor, sore eyes away till I was finished reading them all.

Do you know the feeling when you close the book and white jealousy engulfs you that this book wasn\'t written by you? That\'s what I felt when I finally clicked the mouse on the \'Start\' button to turn the PC off.

Love, Hate; Desire, Passiveness; Life, Death; Good and Evil. All this (including religion and sex ;) is true life. Each of us comes across this each day. There\'s always a fight, always a war. There\'s always the effort to keep these sides in proportion.

You are a brilliant writer. But I won\'t flatter you too much: you aren\'t a very modest woman; you know that yourself. I just want to thank you. Thanks for one of the best stories I have ever read. Thanks for making me feel that spark of jealousy. Thanks for writing.

this is a great chapter and i\"m beginning to like brooder a lot. Cant wait for the next

Sue

This is really good!!

Wow...now that was an amazing chapter, thats for sure. With all this good angst, it\'s nice to get some..I dunno...smile worthy stuff in there. ^__^ I feel, lighter reading this chapter than all the others, which was nice. I can\'t wait till the next one, so many twists. Ja ne!

Love Neko

Great chapters as always! You know how good you are so I don\'t think I need to say anything else but I will ask you this: Why do I have to be a blood sucking whore? LOL! (better late than never, right?)