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Waiiiiitt a tick! Oh God, is that you?! Awwwww... you son of a bitch! How the hell are ya babe?

Camaro

Uhhhhhh I dont think thats oh God. oh God is smarter sounding, that person can barely put two sentences together.

I love this chapter. How Goku goes into how much he told the old man, expecting rejection at any moment, and then... he doesn\'t get it.

*winks* Bruder has a point, about how Goku told him all the bad things, but none of the good. I do have to think Goku only wanted to confess, and part of confessing is only reliving the bad stuff, none of your accomplishments. Now isn\'t that ass backwards.

I hope Goku will find the strength to shed the guilt and be able to forgive himself. If he can, people like Bulma will once again be able to relax in the knowledge that there is a hero. Well, that is if Goku can find her first.

Always be a friend when he needs one eh? Hmmmm, wonder who\'s going to show up. I don\'t mean the short version of Vegeta. That\'s almost a given. I wonder who else is going to just happen along in the nick of time.

I was soooo happy to see this update. I can\'t wait for the next.

Hell Yeah! Another chapter! I feel like I\'ve been waiting forever, but that\'s my own impatience talking for ya. Well, I love this chapter. Finally, someone to tell Goku he\'s not so evil as he believes himself to be. I just want to hug Bruder. Excellent chapter and please update again soon. I\'ll be looking forward to it.

~Yuurei~

mmm. I like Bruder, and I like that there are two delicious vegetas. one that\'s evil and appeals to me and the other that\'s just a bastard and appeals to me just as much. this was quite a nice chapter, and i get the feeling i\'m going to be talking like Bruder.

this reminds me of a technique i\'ve noticed in most horror stories that are really nice; a break from extreme horror and action and the like. a breather, if you would. *shrug* dunno, even for being a fic that pushs the limits of everything acceptable- this is quite professional in some aspects.



aka: i love you and i want a fetus in a bag from you. XD


digi

I love this fic and I can\'t wait until it\'s done! I am chomping at the bit to find out what happens and am about to die of curiosity! Update soon! Don\'t let the lack of reviews get ya down hon, we are all reading this fic and enjoying every word. Most people are kinda ashamed of themselves for a couple of reasons #1. They can\'t write as fantasticly as you #2. They are secretly in love with the ideas that this fic inspires and can\'t handle it. and lastly #3. They are afraid

Love ya babe!

Vegeta\'s Mate

Excellent chapter.....I was getting concerned for Goku there (lol). I can\'t wait to see how you will end this story. BTW, I have read the other story you wrote about Vegeta. I really enjoyed it! Please continue to write on it as well. Kudos as always! Keep writing......

hey when are you going to update this? It\'s been a long time. Turanto

Bravo, beautifully written I give you that. But I wonder, have you played Final Fantasy X , for if you have, there\'s a little lack of inspiration emanating. Interesting point of view show all the way though, that\'s nice alright. There\'s somthing else I\'d like to know, have you read Anne Rice? Because it really looks like you have, might be wrong on that though.

Anyway that\'s a good fic. Keep on with it will you?

I dont mean to be a jeminey cricket but sometime your really mean to people and i need to tell you. great chapter and please email me when the next one comes out

Sue