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Okay, so you know I\'ve read this else where, but I have to be honest. The first time, and really even this time, I read these words and thought \"WHAT!\" Goku wasn\'t the only clueless one. *shakes head at self*

You succeeded (sp?) in gory. Goku\'s discriptions made ME want to vomit. I really do feel pity for those people, because the first part was a spell of some sort, they had no control, but when Goku interupted this Vegeta imposter they began to regain some control. I can\'t imagine they stayed sain for long when they relised what was happening.

This is becoming very intense. I hope you update soon.

This is scary as hell!!! My friend recommended this to me and I cant fucking wait for an update. This is truly remarkable an unlike anything I\'ve EVER EVER EVER EVER EVER read before!! PLEASE UPDATE!

awesome chapter. I really like where this is going

hey great story. but pls take it easy on cujo1991 hes just a kid ok?

sue

it\'s ok. just email her and she\'ll explain it for you.

Moooooore XD Hope everything is ok with you, and that your alright. Glad that you updated and I can\'t wait to know what happens next.

Ja ne!!

Ah, so he did understand that the first time he had taken advantage of Bulma, and in a way has continued to do so.

*shakes head* Maybe he should have learned from his trysts with Vegeta that he couldn\'t go back to \'just\' appologize. The circumstances are a little different, He was going to tell Vegeta off and Bulma he was sorry, but he is still addicted. Your choice of word \'addict\' was well used. It would be like a changing one drug for another, thinking this time it wouldn\'t end up the same way.

The dream at the beggining of this was creepy. Then, I have to wonder if it was only a dream.

Well, wasn\'t that foreboding... I loved it again. Loved when Gokuu was telling Bulma he wanted everything, beauty, pain, etc, for his own. If a man said that to me...well, I\'d give him stupendous sex too! o_o Heh. ^_^ Can\'t wait for more! Ps. I loved the dream sequence, but was that really a dream? o_O

This is an excellently evil story. It appeals to the dark place in my appallingly human heart. Noone realises that good and evil are one. They are moulded perfectly to fit each other in ways noone could ever imagine. Enough of my rambling on my beliefs. I\'m waiting for another chapter, and for you to email me back about my friend, GforeV / kaka4geta. She\'s waiting for you to get back to her about her last email to you. You remember that one don\'t you, Camaro?

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Vega

Hey, I\'m sorry I havn\'t kept up with you....I\'v been having Problams with my comp...but luckily I got some of my story up...you can read it...pwez...hehe ^_^

Anyway I\'m still following your story and I can\'t wait for more...I hope to E-mail you when I get my computer back...Hope to talk soon. ByeBye~