rate_review Reviews

I have a question for Ch 33 part 2.....is the part about the amazons for real! I mean that shit would hurt! Anyway enoungh of my disbelief....I really love this story! It kind makes me sad that I'm almost done reading it.

Amazing.....no,not even that word explains the pure emotion and time put into this fic...no amount of praise could come to the mind that explain the feelings that your fic caused. Goku, the struggling soul searching for more and finding only dark corners in his soul that even he did not know exist. Vegeta, like the snake that holds the forbidden fruit; tempting and yet warning of the conseqences at the same time. I won't lie and say the I've read the complete fic yet....because that's a lie that should never be told. But I will say,the most that I have read......goes beyond angst and more into dark understanding. To be honest you have gained a groupie for all time.

...Wow.... Just... Wow.

I must admit that I began to read this fanfic a long time ago, but I stopped before I even finished the second chapter. I'm not a religous person, so I didn't think this story was for me.

However, I came across it again and decided to give it another go. I'm glad I did. You truely have a gift for writing. The idea, the emotions, the descriptions.... it was like I was there. Perfection. True perfection.

Bravo.

i think monster has been superbly written. Excellent use of imagery and creativity to do the unspeakable. I Rate a perfect 10.

I started reading this on MM.org and saw your message about AFF.net and came here before reading this. I must say, you deserve a standing ovation. This story was brillant. I found it very interesting how many of the views mirror my own. It was very well crafted but there were way to many spelling errors in the first third of the story. You are a very creative person and I applaud your creativity. I look forward to the sequel when you get the chance.

Hardy Har:
I was reading through the reviews for the last chapter and I couldn\'t help but notice yours. You know, the one about Todesengel and the story \"Strong Heart\" and how the author\'s better than Camaro? Well, if you truly don\'t know exactly what you\'re talking about, I have only one thing to say to you.
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Seriously, I needed that. Thanks ^-^!!

I want to start by saying that Monster is by far one of the only stories I've read thus far that takes elements from "real life" and adds them to a fictional world so gracefully. Most of the yaoi stories I've read have no plot, no insight as to what the characters are thinking and feeling (just pure smut), but Monster has both of those qualities and more, I can tell that you put quite a bit of yourself into the story. You give an unbiased veiw on all of the characters, especially Chichi, who is so often slaughtered in fanfiction and that is something I've only seen twice in fanfiction, keep up the good work Camaro, I will definately keep reading. Expect more reviews in the future and much fanart!

- GG

shit!!! you should sooo be righting books right now. i mean the last chapter where Vegeta comes alive again is a pure classic!!! but its the good sort of cassic not the corrny type. i really think you should leave ur fic like it is, make people beg a bit in there reviews.

dude soo luv ur story!!! and i am giving you major props for not giving a flying fuck about all the flames you get. like 'just being honest' if that person is soooo affended by ur story then why did they even bother to read it. i mean no one said they HAD to read ur fic!!!.....sorry im a lil irritated right now. update soon!!!

Yes, I finally finished, and I must say a few things....Amazing, superb, outstanding, great, perfect, jaw-dropping...the list could go on. This could be a movie, seriously. The way you described the characters was amazing. The connection between Goku and the devil was perfectly described. Vegeta's character, wow, I'm excited to see where this goes when I read number 2! The whole time, I was gripping my seat and nervous to read what happens. The way you set up the plot and settings was so creative, it can't be described. Again, great stuff, and I'm off to read more of your work.