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hey camaro, My email is on the fritiz, so this is my new emil. Chibi_kid77@yahoo.com. Send me the corrected story coz I can\'t get into my mailbox in hotmail.

steven

*Whines* Where\'s the rest? I love this story so much. Please publish the next chapter soon!

this is definitely one of the more original pieces I have found. Astounding really.

You seem arrogant at first but I think you might have some back up here. Detailing is sensational and the content is intriguing to say the least.

Email me with an update!

I like you. I\'m happy your on the DBZ side also. When I first started to read this I thought you were one of those ppl against fanfics. You\'re a really good writer. You know how to keep your reader\'s attention so far. . . I also like the fact your artict and you will so you yourself can only take so much bitching.

lol, and yes, I have read it many times because of that on other sites. Mwuahahahahahahhaha.

So, since this is a chapter on nothing but sex, I will grade the sex. VERY GOOD. *licks lips* Most of the time I find hentia sex (written, *winks*) to be so boring. This wasn\'t. :)

I am still with the oppionion of \"NO Goku! You are taking total advantage of the situation.\" *shakes head* Bulma isn\'t complaining though.

I do like the fact she asked about Goku\'s motives for threatening her. \"What if I do tell?\" Ah, and she had him exactly where she wanted him once again! *shakes head again*

So, you see, I really am just a sex feind, but this story is usually something out of the ordinary that I don\'t have to read just about the sex.

This chapter was a nice break from to gore, if not the angst and own personal concerns about Goku\'s behavior.

That was one helluva chapter, alot of info and insight into Bulma\'s psyche. I really liked this chapter, hope more will be forthcomming!

Love ya Camaro!

Vegeta\'s Mate

GOD, I love your writing!!! This story is increadible, it\'s sexy, exciting, spellbinding and something
completely different to anything I\'ve ever read, I think you\'re up there with writers such as Anne Rice...
you could sell this story as a book and I\'d definately be the first one to buy it.
Love how it\'s so dark and full of love, hate, guilt, religion, sex and confusion, it\'s lush ;)
You\'re definately worth praise, so don\'t listen to all the assholes out there -they dont know what they\'re talking about!
Love ya/Angel

Okay.. let me tell you somethings.. One.. this is awesome story, I didnt even read it here I read it at the Vault. Two this maybe tmi, but I got too hard off it. lol Does that make me sick? Yes probbably, but still that makes it a damn good story. lol . I think I told a millon people about it I was so crazy about it. *gravels* I am your new biggest fan. lol. ^.^ thats all I wanted to say. lol






Prisma says he likes the ding but not the ling.

Hi Camaro it\'s deepoet again...I know we got off to a rocky start but that doesn\'t mean I can\'t review you story does it? I hope not! But anyway chap. 25 was unexpected but very well worded nonetheless. And 26....I would\'ve liked it alot better if you would have went into details with the Goku/Bulma sex part or maybe you\'ll do it in 27? One more thing I noticed that you put 25 and 26 up quite quickly! About how long does it take you to write a chapter roughly?