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January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh and Noneya? As in Noneya Business, nobody likes anonymous reviews sweetie! Grow up! Don\'t say anything if you\'re scared to.
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January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Goku! NOOOO! What is he thinking? Bulma is drunk and under deress, he\'s really taking advantage of the situation. *covers eyes in disappointment*
And why did he decide that he needed/wanted to do something sinful on his own? Ack.
Really well written chapter, and despite my disappointment in Goku\'s behavior, this chapter and it\'s outcomes are totally believable.
And why did he decide that he needed/wanted to do something sinful on his own? Ack.
Really well written chapter, and despite my disappointment in Goku\'s behavior, this chapter and it\'s outcomes are totally believable.
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January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello Camaro, sorry for not reviewing earler.
\'monster\' is the best dark fic I\'ve read in years. Hell it makes \'The Texas Chainsaw Massacre\' look like a pink show. (don\'t ask)
Chibi_kid, out.
\'monster\' is the best dark fic I\'ve read in years. Hell it makes \'The Texas Chainsaw Massacre\' look like a pink show. (don\'t ask)
Chibi_kid, out.
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, we got to see really different sides to Bulma in this chapter. The first part of it, when she was drinking, I don\'t think I have ever seen Bulma portraied (sp?) as a person who has gone over the edge, but I believe she has. I do understand Goku\'s confusion/disappointment. Here\'s a person who\'s been a solid foundation for him most of his life, and she\'s lost it.
The twist about her dad being like that was shocking. I would have NEVER thought of him capable of such things. However, I am a little disappointed in Bulma for taking out her anger on Goku for not being there. She never told him what was happening, and yet she expected him to play the hero for her. Whether or not she wants to believe it, she did learn a few bad things from her mother, two of the being able to cover up what was happening and NOT telling anyone it was happening.
If Goku didn\'t know that she was in trouble, how was he suppose to help? I believe that if Bulma had told him that she needed the help, Goku would have helped, no questions asked and no proof needed.
Now, if she was looking for someone to just beat her father up, then Goku may have needed the proof, being the angel that Bulma accused him of.
The twist about her dad being like that was shocking. I would have NEVER thought of him capable of such things. However, I am a little disappointed in Bulma for taking out her anger on Goku for not being there. She never told him what was happening, and yet she expected him to play the hero for her. Whether or not she wants to believe it, she did learn a few bad things from her mother, two of the being able to cover up what was happening and NOT telling anyone it was happening.
If Goku didn\'t know that she was in trouble, how was he suppose to help? I believe that if Bulma had told him that she needed the help, Goku would have helped, no questions asked and no proof needed.
Now, if she was looking for someone to just beat her father up, then Goku may have needed the proof, being the angel that Bulma accused him of.
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed the update. It\'s a little hard to see bulmas dad hit bulma, but you explained it well. I was wondering what happened with chichi. I hope the next chapter tells a little bit more of the whole situation.
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very right camaro. West it would seem you got yourself into this without researching or knowing that you were biting off more then you could chew. Pretty rude.
Camaro I found this new chapter disturbing. Mabe not in the way you had wanted me to but for other reasons. The past you gve of bulma and her fathers treatment is haunting. Morbidly so since I recognize the patterns as those that you had describe in your blog when talking of your OWN father. I also know that you write from experience and make things personal. I want to talk to you about this more in depth later on. Email me, Emily
Camaro I found this new chapter disturbing. Mabe not in the way you had wanted me to but for other reasons. The past you gve of bulma and her fathers treatment is haunting. Morbidly so since I recognize the patterns as those that you had describe in your blog when talking of your OWN father. I also know that you write from experience and make things personal. I want to talk to you about this more in depth later on. Email me, Emily
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You\'ve got a bad mind, and the flamers can come bigger than you.
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January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Instead of lashing out at the site owner(s) (not to mention, others) with hateful rants and vulgar litanies, why not try a little GRATITUDE ... a little HUMILITY? They\'re doing all of us a favor, allowing us to post our work FOR FREE! The way I see it, Ayla (et al.) pays the bills and makes the rules, so .... she has the right to delete any story she sees fit, whether it be yours, mine or her baby sister\'s! If you don\'t like it here ... why not build your own site?
Are you certain you\'re even old enough to access this site? Your author\'s notes and profile tirades certainly don\'t make you sound like it. Grow up, already! Who knows? Your work might even discover more than ONE dimension for it! \'Writing for writing\'s sake?\' -- Tell me, from which Hair Band Rock Fanzine did you pluck that little gem of a cliche?
Are you certain you\'re even old enough to access this site? Your author\'s notes and profile tirades certainly don\'t make you sound like it. Grow up, already! Who knows? Your work might even discover more than ONE dimension for it! \'Writing for writing\'s sake?\' -- Tell me, from which Hair Band Rock Fanzine did you pluck that little gem of a cliche?
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January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dear Nienna West,
Maybe if you had read clearly through my \"rant\" you would not have been so eager to make a complete MORON of yourself. That rant was towards FANFICTION.NET--NOT Adultfanfiction.net. I, for one, feel entirely justified in all that I said regarding that because of the false advertisement \"Unleash your imagination and free your soul\" that is so proudly posted on FFnet, and so blatantly corrupted by further bans and rules. Any REAL yaoi or hentai fan despises that ffnet not only banned our content but also continues to promote an ideal that they do NOT uphold.
And to add to your list of ASSumptions, you\'ve also so abrasively concluded that I\'m not old enough to be on this adult site. I\'m not even going to argue that because any idiot who ACTUALLY took the time out to READ my story--BEFORE clicking a review button and so publicly making an ASS of themself--would know that I\'m certainly old enough and talented enough to be here.
I\'m just not so sure about you since you\'ve so childishly taken everything I said and totally thrown it out of context in the pursuit to \"put me in my place\"--so to speak. I understand that it\'s human nature to hate what we feel is stronger then us and in our nature to despise an idea that pertains to arrogance or possible conceit, but if I were you, I\'d take this as a lesson learned.
\"One dimension\" proved to me one thing that I might have concluded anyways...You insulted a story and an author you didn\'t even bother to A.) read or B.) understand and as a result, are publicly shown for being an impertinent, brash and foolish little girl.
\"Writing for writing\'s sake\" is a saying that basically means, that you write because you\'re passionate about it: because you want to. Not because you want a review number or praise, but because you FEEL whole when you do it. It\'s something that I myself have strived very hard to achieve, and I\'m still working on it. Do yourself a favor, and write something rather than come by my stories looking for a fight and a challenge when you\'re not going to get one.
Sheesh! What IS it with people this week? Everyone wants to start shit with me! haha But I have neither the patience nor the concern for that. I just actually saw your \"flame\" (or whatever stupid category you\'d throw it in) and figured it was best to address it and let you know that your assumptions were totally incorrect. Read and understand something before you attack it and make yourself look completely stupid. Do your homework honey.
Love
Camaro
Maybe if you had read clearly through my \"rant\" you would not have been so eager to make a complete MORON of yourself. That rant was towards FANFICTION.NET--NOT Adultfanfiction.net. I, for one, feel entirely justified in all that I said regarding that because of the false advertisement \"Unleash your imagination and free your soul\" that is so proudly posted on FFnet, and so blatantly corrupted by further bans and rules. Any REAL yaoi or hentai fan despises that ffnet not only banned our content but also continues to promote an ideal that they do NOT uphold.
And to add to your list of ASSumptions, you\'ve also so abrasively concluded that I\'m not old enough to be on this adult site. I\'m not even going to argue that because any idiot who ACTUALLY took the time out to READ my story--BEFORE clicking a review button and so publicly making an ASS of themself--would know that I\'m certainly old enough and talented enough to be here.
I\'m just not so sure about you since you\'ve so childishly taken everything I said and totally thrown it out of context in the pursuit to \"put me in my place\"--so to speak. I understand that it\'s human nature to hate what we feel is stronger then us and in our nature to despise an idea that pertains to arrogance or possible conceit, but if I were you, I\'d take this as a lesson learned.
\"One dimension\" proved to me one thing that I might have concluded anyways...You insulted a story and an author you didn\'t even bother to A.) read or B.) understand and as a result, are publicly shown for being an impertinent, brash and foolish little girl.
\"Writing for writing\'s sake\" is a saying that basically means, that you write because you\'re passionate about it: because you want to. Not because you want a review number or praise, but because you FEEL whole when you do it. It\'s something that I myself have strived very hard to achieve, and I\'m still working on it. Do yourself a favor, and write something rather than come by my stories looking for a fight and a challenge when you\'re not going to get one.
Sheesh! What IS it with people this week? Everyone wants to start shit with me! haha But I have neither the patience nor the concern for that. I just actually saw your \"flame\" (or whatever stupid category you\'d throw it in) and figured it was best to address it and let you know that your assumptions were totally incorrect. Read and understand something before you attack it and make yourself look completely stupid. Do your homework honey.
Love
Camaro
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January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know what? I\'m not going to say anything bad about this story because it was damn near the best thing I\'ve ever read! But I\'ve been to your page Camaro and I saw that you like to get on people about their misspelled words and grammar mistakes and such...you might want to proof read you own stuff before you do that...just for future references. And one more thing, has Goku ever been to church or no? I noticed you kept changing that one little detail up. Not a biggie just thought I\'d bring it up. If you having anything you want to say in regards of what I said just email me and yes this is my REAL email address.-_^