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Another riviting chapter, I\'ve read this one already but it is still worth a second read especially when we\'re getting to the crazy parts that make you wanna jump in and drown in the story line. That\'s what I love about this fic, it inspires others to just read and never stop, getting so entrapped in the story that they have a fit when they find that the next chapter isn\'t posted yet. Anyway I just wanted to ask when you are going to send chapter 32 to www.saiyanhideaway.us, I\'m about to pull myself bald wondring what is gonna happen next. Ginia sends her regards as well.


Love ya babe!

I am very curious to understand the look Chichi gave Vegeta. Makes me wonder.

It was very shocking to hear Bulma voice Goku\'s own convictions. I wonder if she ever had the feeling that Goku DID know exactly what she was talking about.

Nice to see a mention of Piccolo.

I liked Goku\'s memory of Krillin. And I loved Krillin\'s explination to Gohan. Very touching.

Ah, naughty evil Vegeta, \'making\' Goku do bad things.

your just a bitch

To *wouldn\'t you like to know* You say that you haven\'t read any of Camaro\'s work and you never intend to, then how pray tell do you know that she\'s an arrogent bitch? Has she reviewed your stories and found them lacking? I wonder, since you seem to have the balls to review someone without leaving your name or e-mail, do you have the balls to actually post a story that would be remembered beyond the first reading? Camaro has and still does. If you can have your feelings hurt by someone\'s comments when they are trying to give you an outside look on how your story may actually affect people, then you don\'t need to be an author. I am an author, I have bad reviews and good reviews but the thing that I always remember in the back of my head is that reviewers don\'t only tell you what a good job you are doing.....they tell you what you are doing wrong and a way to fix it.


Sorry for ranting in your review list Camaro,

Vegeta\'s Mate

Dear Camaro,

I would just like to say that you are everything you say you are. You are a fantastic writer, a reasonable critic, (and from what I can tell from you photo ~_~) a beautiful woman, and lastly an insperation.

I came across your story reading the work of...Agent 182 was it? Anyway, I see you have been reccomended by many and rightly I must say. I\'v read through your work and can only wish you continue. If you were ever to be called an arrogent bitch it is only because the people who can\'t handle the truth, hide from it with fear while dis\'ing your art.

I havn\'t created an account, but I\'m thinking of doing so soon...I can say without arrogant feeling\'s that I\'m a good writer. Maybe one day you will get to read my work...I can only hope you update and continue facisnating me, keeping me up hours and hours in the morning just to finish reading the next chapter of everyone of your story\'s.

I know this must sound repulsive...I just wanted to tell you myself that, you have potential...Your so young and have so much experiance and skill. You give insperation to me...and I\'m sure I\'m not the only one. I, being of only 16, can hope that if I don\'t give up the skill of writing I can become as wonderful as you.

You\'ve captivated me...congradulation\'s...on everything.

~hidden in the shadows of my room, I dream...~
Anji~

A triumph of evil versus good splendidly done. This is a riviting story! I can\'t wait for you to update, I am going to put this fic on my fav list. Well done Camaro!

Sorry to have to resort to reviewing my OWN story, I\'ll delete this later folks but I do have something I\'d like to say.


Ahem*


Attention: to every piece of shit, wheel chair drooling asshole on this site that thinks I fucking flamed them:


In the words of the great God Kinney: \"To all you SEXUALLY CHALLENGED, Bipolar, whatever the FUCK you are\'s\" I do not flame stories. I\'m beyond that and if it was a flame, it might have sounded a bit something like the literarily challenged asscrack comment that I got from \"wouldn\'t you like to know\". IF your story contains stupid, bullshit things that need to be taken out, I WILL tell you about it. IF your stories is a pathetic attempt at writing sex for sex\'s sake when it becomes obvious that you are a sexually deprived, lonely individual on a quest to get laid through writing about it.... I WILL tell you about it. IF your story sucks as a whole and was a complete waste of my time reading it.... I WILL tell you about it.


AND FINALLY, IF YOU as an AUTHOR are a complete fucking embarrassment to both this site AND yourself... guess what mother fucker... I WILL tell you about it.


So if I haven\'t gotten my point across, let me just reiterate. I do not flame. I criticize because I have the talent and experience to do so. I am an English major and I know more than you. Get used to it. If you don\'t like it.... Let me refer you to someone who gives a fuck. Lastly, you\'re lucky to get my advice because I\'m the only one around here who will give it honestly. I don\'t care how many reviews you have or how big your \"fan base\" is. If your story sucks, be prepared to be informed about it if your \"greatest number 1 fans!\" wont. Use it, admire it, fucking love it because if I took the time out to give it, then obviously I felt it was useful and not wasted on someone who couldn\'t use it to improve.


Love

Camaro

JFYI I think you shoud stop flaming peoples stories and
giving them advice or whatever because your not the best
author around and you act like you know it all. i havent
read any of your storys and i dont\' want to because i hear
your a real arrogant bitch. from what ive read on other
peoples reviews,
you are.




just letting you know

I like the sound of this although you sound a bit errogant from the start. ill continue

Yipe. I\'m sort of lost at this point. I\'m guessing with time, things will start to peice together, but it\'s still rather antagonizing not knowing what\'s going on and that I\'m going to have to wait a rather long time before peices start to fill in again. This is probably the most suspensful fanfiction I\'ve come across...
But as I\'ve said before, it\'s brillant, so always