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by Camaro

person macha
schedule August 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think Vegeta showed Goku an awful lot in this one half of the night. *shudders* Even I like to pretend that some of those things don't exsist. Although a couple of them have been placed on my own doorstep of this life. I don't want to go into details though. Just know that my life isn't all roses, as Goku's seems to have been up until now. I am not certain that anyones is. Ah, the power of anime.

Love is such a tainted word. It's so easy to say it, when really, it should be something that is proven by actions. Very rarely is it held as sacred as it should be. I don't have to wonder at Vegeta's scoffing at the word. Somtimes I scoff too. Hmmm, I wonder if that's why I shudder at mushy seens in movies, thinking to myself, "What kind of crap is that?"

I would have vomitted too. I guess there is a little of Goku in here somewhere.
person Lady Blue
schedule August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ho hum. Just me, wanderirounround and re-reading the precioussss.
Oooh, I do SO love Vegeta. Who's to say that what he is is evil? I find it quite stimulating. And he's a seme no matter what, in my opinion. Pride. Dun't care about insignificant height differences. Vegeta is domineering, Kakarot is a fluffy bunny. D'oh! Forget "a", Vegeta is THE seme. Always.
Man, I forget how many s I's I've reviewed. Oh well.
person Billy Hillneck
schedule August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dang girl, your story is really good! and I haven't even had any moonshine yet today! Keep this up I can't wait for the new chapter!

Billy Hillneck
person Saiyajin-Neko
schedule August 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My god this is getting so good, i can\'t get enough. I need to know more, i need more Goku and Vegeta moments. Please update soon, Ja ne!
person Lady Blue
schedule August 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hullo, tis me again. *shuffles feet* What can a kitty do but be impatient? Ah, sorry for pestering you so much with my constant reviewing of only one chapter. My vice. *sniffles* I guess you don\'t have your laptop yet; unless I\'m completely incorrect and you\'re just taking two weeks away to hunt walrus. *perks up* Here in the kitty\'s mauve head there are many walrii... *does a happy little dance of amusement*
Er... *cough* This chapter is just especially shibby, seeing as how it\'s the most recent chapter. You know... the one last updated. The most current posting. And I\'m sue ale all know how much kitties love up-to-date chapters. Especially the new ones. *stares* Hint. Hint. (blatant begging for a quick update next time, in case you missed the very subtle hints. Kitty is very subtle. Subtle is her middle name. No, we\'re not on medication.)
In other news, I have come to grab you by the leg and smile my cute little irresistable smile at you. :) <---- see? That\'s what I call a smile. *clutches leg*
Sniffles... don\'t hate me if I\'m randomly annoying... *has a nervous breakdown and begins to bawl*

... (NOW we\'re on medication. *worries*)
person Lady Blue
schedule August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
! Thank goodness, yesterday I couldn\'t find Monster when I came to look for it, and I was so worried that maybe you had been deleted again, or Montser had been taken off for some reasond Ind I tried Kiss of Hell but for some reason to do with my computer it didn\'t work either, and now I\'m so glad to see it and you again, hooray! *huggles* I missed you!
*cough*
Er... Keep updating and write your soul out, I love you Camaro! *waves* ^_^
~Lady Blue
person ST
schedule July 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LMAO! i\'m so sorry but i reckon the note at the top of this should be posted all over ff.net. God how i h8 those jumped up little hitlers! i think if you carry out your plan to post under a new name everytime they delete then they\'re going to lose wil will to live, so keep going! maybe if everyone complained and pisses and moaned like you we might actually get nc-17s back, but i highly doubt it. The assholes are to busy jerking eachother off!
You go girl. get revenge of the little shits for deleting your account i\'m sure you have the backing of millions as you certainly have my backing. the little bastards did the same to my best m8 all because her put the word \'fuck\' in a story rated pg-13. Honestly any 13 year old that doesn\'t know the work fuck must live in a cave!
sharp objects and keyboards
ST
xxx
person Lady Blue
schedule July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*purrs* Hatred, denial, love here in an instant and gone the next, like a balm of oil set aflame. How I do love the perversion of my own mind, the inversion of my soul. Your words captivate me. Repulse me. Attract me. Dance with me. All of it sinks into my skin, tattooing my heart with a steak knife. And you, yourself, the mind and idea behind the words, intrigue me. Your arrogance and your casual acceptance, they switch me on. I love your Monster. Some little voice in my gut is disgusted, wants me to forget what I\'ve read and never look at another word you write. Obviously, I am not listening.
The Monster is food for the intelligent darkness of my brain. By all means. Continue.
person evilchild(not signed in)
schedule July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m ewinewing just because I feel what you said in the first chapter of Monster. I like you just beacuse of that. I\'m not the only one who thinks that exact same way. They (ff.net) can take away our fics and our accounts but we\'ll just keep coming back. Yes, it\'s hurtful but we\'ll live. It\'s like I always say... get over. It\'s mean but just don\'t sit there and cry and never post again. They can\'t stop us so what\'s the point in trying? It\'s a waste of everyone\'s damn time. And I\'m with you on what you said about flamers. Let they ass flame if they want to, I got something for that ass. I want somebody to try and flame me. I ain\'t the on be be fucking with. You flame at your own damn risk. I\'m a mean ass bitch and I let everyone know that when they flame like a dumb ass. I\'m sorry... I\'m just ranting again. I get like this every time it\'s against ff.net or idiot flamers. You keep on writing! I just read the first chapter but your fic is great so far. Don\'t let no one get you down!
person Keket
schedule July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You\'ve got me hooked! I can\elieelieve how well you write! Wow, just wow!

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