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Yay! Your back, wahoooooooooo!

Sadly I think I am about to become a different sort of Vegeta convert. I say sadly, because while all of the stuff he said was true, I wish it wasn\'t. I liked the what you wrote about suicide though; thas bas been my view of it for some time now.

I can see Goku has VERY mixed feelings about all of this. This not only being sex with other men, but also what Vegeta said about how he views the earth and that Goku could really never be a part of it and REALLY be himself too. The very sad story of wanting to have your cake and eat it too. That can only happen for so long before there is no cake to possess either way.

Sorry this is so short, I have to go to work now. I ery ery happy you are back.

To tell you the truth, when I first began to read you\'re opening words on fanfiction.net, it was the only reason I took the time to read this story. I learned of the version on here, so I came to see what the fuss was about. When I read you\'re reaction to you\'re flamers and you\'re situation with being banned, it was what first compelled me. But I\'m sure you don\'t care about alat, at, so I\'ll simply get to the point.
When I began to read you\'re story, I was captivated right from the start. I\'ve never come across a story like this. I found that it was easy to feel yourself as if you\'re looking through the character\'s eyes (it was written that well). It gives such a realistic point of view, which is only enhanced by the explicit scenes. I\'m uncertain about what the controversy was over this story, because in my personal opinion, I don\'t see how anyone could find something wrong with a story that seems like it could just hop out of the screen and become a reality. You\'ve grasped such a deep part of the human mind pnd put it into words. I find that very extraordinary; I\'m impressed.
Unlike you, I don\'t have the ability to put my reaction from this masterpiece into words, but I still felt obliged to review.
My name of Fanfiction is AngelKitty, and please don\'t think I\'m leaving my penname because I want you to look at my work (because frankly, my work is embarrassing compared to yours). I just want to you take note to my name, because I plan on reading and reviewing your work for a very, long time.
I\'m sure I don\'t have to worry about saying \"don’t let the flamers get you down\"; because I already know you can handle them just fine. So instead, I\'ll leave you with this: You\'re a genius
~Many thanks from a very pleased reader

Hey Camaro-
Glad I read this version instead of the sucky ff.net version where they made you mutiliate this beloved story.
Even though I\'m drugged up and can only write with one hand, I just wanna say I love you and you\'re my favorite author. Only your writing I can truly tolerate and not full-blow criticize; partly because I happen to get the meaning, partly because the writing is so damn good.
I know you must get tjis all the time but I\'m your biggest fan.

love,
bunni

Well now, this has just become a big mess. It\'s a grand mess of blood and perversion though, like a s\'more. So sweet and nicethouthough the gooey white stuff burns a bit at first. Ah...that was off topic. Yeah, keep it going, I\'ll be sure not to miss the rest becuase I don\'t like missing rare chances to read great stuff like this.

Hm...somethings just came to me, that yes, while Kakarot is commiting his crimes and everything, deep down he is the monster. But no, it\'s Goku, as he is a human soul who should not enjoy such things, but *sigh* he has realised this. You\'ve added another chapter with another small corner of Goku that no one has ever caputered. Kudos to you Camaro.

Faith

Ah Chapter 11...oh so interesting as always. i love your vision of Goku. It\'s like nothing else I\'ve ever read. Loved it.

It\'s certainly very crowded in Goku\'s head at tomenoment. Not only with the ideas and thoughts running in circles in there, but also the several different ppl he seems to have some sort of attachment to/with? I really was shocked that Kakarott paid a visit. I know that I shouldn\'t have been. I should have been reading this story, the whole time the question I should have been asking was \"When is Kakarott going to pay a visit?\" The way the whole incounter totally through Goku for a loop and creating some very touchy self doubt. Eee gads!

The thoughts he has, still trying to sort our what happened to him by Vegeta. Knowing that he shouldn\'t have liked it, convencing himself that he didn\'t, and yet knowing deep down that he did. He\'s walking on dangerous ground trying to hide that from himself and others. It would be best to get it out in the open right away. I don\'t think this is going to be the last such display he gives to Chi Chi. It would seem as though it\'s only a matter of time before those thoughts running through his head get out of hand. That being said, I can\'t see him betraying the encounter anymore than he thinks that Vegeta is going to.

I found the thoughts about Bulma somewhat disturbing, but I think that your interpretation of the situation is correct. I only got to see the children\'s version on T.V., but how would something like that be if it were in real life without any sensoring? I am betting very similar to the way you wrote it.

So, he\'s going. Just as whoever left the note knew he would/couldn\'t resist. I\'ll be waiting to see what is waiting for him in New Orleans. (P.S. I liked the address, it said a lot!)

I think the word your looking for is ADULT, as in adult fanfiction. Not just fanfiction. Of course, I like the lemons too, (who doesn\'t?) But it\'s great to have a story come along that has some meat to it!

Should I feel sorry for Goku now? I don\'t think so. I think I like to see Vegeta egg him on, deeper and deeper into who/what he really is.

\"Child\", what and apptly put word. Goku really still is a child in some ways. The way I see it, Vegeta\'s been through a lot to get him where he is. Do ole ole heartedly agree that every deprived and lustful sayian needs to behave in such a manor? No, but I think that Vegeta knows how badly Goku wants out of his bounds, even if Goku doesn\'t yet. Goku\'s always been someone\'s pet hunting dog. Vegeta knows what it\'s like to run wild. What would a ferral Goku be like?

Is trying to pull someone \'up\' to your level any worse than someone trying to drag another person down? I don\'t know, I think that I will to to ponder this. I think that the key to this is, \"Have you walked a mile in their shoes?\"

Controversial is always exciting. This could possibly be the best chapter yet, with the raw emotion and the sexy - almost brutal - lemon. I loved it when Vegeta whispered \'filthy whore\', just to top it all off. It was excellent. Sometimes you read a sex scene and it seems exactly like the last five or so that you read (I think I\'m guilty of this as well). Sometimes I actually end up skipping them rather than reading more of the same. But I\'d finished reading this one before I realised I was reading it, then I went back and read it again. Thanks for posting this fic here, it\'s great to have thinthing fresh and different to look at.

This story just gets better and better.