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June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah now, tell me what I missed. Were you implying a lemon or a lime? Hmmm? Either way...*drools as mind plays over time*.
Anyway, Yamcha was starting to even piss me off. Who\'s the idot in that conversation? I think that I\'ll pick the one that was acting like he was the only thing that mattered in the world. I think I know why Krillin baled on him.
So, was it actually in Vegeta\'s plans to give Gohan that ring, or was it jusway way to occupy the kids mind for a while? Something about the kids attitude was off. *shivers*
I have to go and contemplate whether or not I\'d like to see a Goku/Kakarott walking around without a consious(did I spell that correctly? If I didn\'t, I what I was making reference to is what usually shows up as a devil on one shoulder, and an angel on the other.)
Anyway, Yamcha was starting to even piss me off. Who\'s the idot in that conversation? I think that I\'ll pick the one that was acting like he was the only thing that mattered in the world. I think I know why Krillin baled on him.
So, was it actually in Vegeta\'s plans to give Gohan that ring, or was it jusway way to occupy the kids mind for a while? Something about the kids attitude was off. *shivers*
I have to go and contemplate whether or not I\'d like to see a Goku/Kakarott walking around without a consious(did I spell that correctly? If I didn\'t, I what I was making reference to is what usually shows up as a devil on one shoulder, and an angel on the other.)
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June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Always look forward to reading your fics, the dialogue in this chapter was amazing!
Vegeta\'s night visit was really daring, and the ring he gave Gohan?????
Thinking about it, its really harsh how Goku\'s friends put him down like that, brush him off as the \'idiot\'. And Yamcha had the gall to actually say it!
I thoroughly enjoyed the chap! ^_^
Anyways, *Scowls at fic* I\'m actually supposed to be doing my work. *Scowls at Camaro for writing fic*
...But no harm done, just a little distraction from *sighs* work, which I now have to get back to.
Looking forward to the next chapter! ^-^
Vegeta\'s night visit was really daring, and the ring he gave Gohan?????
Thinking about it, its really harsh how Goku\'s friends put him down like that, brush him off as the \'idiot\'. And Yamcha had the gall to actually say it!
I thoroughly enjoyed the chap! ^_^
Anyways, *Scowls at fic* I\'m actually supposed to be doing my work. *Scowls at Camaro for writing fic*
...But no harm done, just a little distraction from *sighs* work, which I now have to get back to.
Looking forward to the next chapter! ^-^
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June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOO! Enter kakarot!XD add a new chappie soon k?
TBF
(P.s thanks for the review, i was very flattered that you think my writing is good, an authoress with your talents)
TBF
(P.s thanks for the review, i was very flattered that you think my writing is good, an authoress with your talents)
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June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOO! Enter kakarot!XD add a new chappie soon k?
TBF
(P.s thanks for the review, i was very flattered that you think my writing is good, an authoress with your talents)
TBF
(P.s thanks for the review, i was very flattered that you think my writing is good, an authoress with your talents)
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June 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Have I told you how much I love this fic? It just keeps getting better and better, I always look forward to reading your fics.
I really like Goku\'s character, so different from how he\'s usually portrayed.
Anyways... I read your Bio and @HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!@ *hugs* hope you get everything you want. ^_^
And sorry for the short review, its too hot today. *Goes off in search of a cold drink.*
I really like Goku\'s character, so different from how he\'s usually portrayed.
Anyways... I read your Bio and @HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!@ *hugs* hope you get everything you want. ^_^
And sorry for the short review, its too hot today. *Goes off in search of a cold drink.*
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June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. Poor confused Goku, and creepy twins. Very discriptive, and thought invoking. I am glad that you updated.
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June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad to see this updated. I love this fic. The plot is thickening, excuse the over used phrase. But it is. :)
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June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You know, I\'m still in love with this story and with love comes obsession...Even though I\'m not quite sure if I like this state I must say that I\'m sure my addiction to Monster is going to be a permanent one, as each chapter seems to add on to it...
So much about my state of mind. Great, you got me...
I do especially e the the way you molded the characters. They are, opposite to many others themselves, yet in a three-dimensional way. Their complexity becomes more and more noticeable and I\'m really wondering where you\'ll take this.
I think I\'ll go off and re-read the final part of the chapter, as I can\'t help but feel that I missed out on a part of high relevance for further chapters...All in my eagerness to KNOW as much and as quickly as possible...
I\'m still thinking about Titus and Aries - and trust me, it\'s been more than 12 seconds *winks*- for they seem vaguely familiar...unfortunately pinpoint it...*grumbles*...
Love, LD
So much about my state of mind. Great, you got me...
I do especially e the the way you molded the characters. They are, opposite to many others themselves, yet in a three-dimensional way. Their complexity becomes more and more noticeable and I\'m really wondering where you\'ll take this.
I think I\'ll go off and re-read the final part of the chapter, as I can\'t help but feel that I missed out on a part of high relevance for further chapters...All in my eagerness to KNOW as much and as quickly as possible...
I\'m still thinking about Titus and Aries - and trust me, it\'s been more than 12 seconds *winks*- for they seem vaguely familiar...unfortunately pinpoint it...*grumbles*...
Love, LD
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June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Get it published. I Kinda work with a Publishing Agency, This will be snapped up, and published in no time.
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May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Incredible!!