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Perfect once again. I love Vegeta in this one too. Hmm...I like Vegeta in just about anything.

Hm hm hm, this looks like something really special. The story has that same Clive Barker flavor, with this odd, yet welcome zing of...um, I dunno...\'magic\'. Hope you continue, I\'ll stroll on in whenever I come across it.

I liked this chapter, there is something about the way you write. I like stories that have an odd kind of feel to them, I wish I could write sometimes, but I can never seem to get the feeling right. I hope you feel better from your accident, my friends boyfriend has a red Camaro and I have a Firebird...I guess it kinda looks like a Camaro. Keep up the good writing and don\'t work too hard!!

this story makes me shiver....and that takes ALOT!..So Good Job!! I would love to be on the mailing list. I aways get so excited when I see another chapter up.

You know, it\'s really hard to find fan fiction out there that actually have content. It gets really old reading story after story of authors having make believe conversations and arguments with fictional characters. But every once in a while you\'ll find soemthing good. I\'m really glad you decided to put this out, despite the obvious potential problems with censorship. I\'m not morbid or anything, but there is a particular beauty about the things you wrote about. Things that I find so hard to say, and people find so hard to take. If it\'s not too much trouble, I\'d like to be on your mailing list. Aeris_is_Dead13@Yahoo.com. I guess you can say you made it up on my short list of authors that actually got somewhere with their words, instead of having a good idea and butchering it with bad writing.

Wow...I loved this. The imagery you create is amazing. Gotta love that Pizza man, huh?

THis is an awsome story! Very creepy but cool. Keep up the good work and I hope you feel better.

This is very very good, but I couldn\'t expect anything less from you.
The description is amasing and I can tell you I\'m already hooked!
Looking forward to the next chap! ^_^

Very sorry to hear about your car accident , do hope you get better soon.
I\'m not much of an artist so I\'m not sure I can help you much, but I will give your website a visit. ^-^

Wow!
Beautiful...description, depth, and emotion. I have NEVER read a story like this. Goku\'s thoughts on Vegeta. I was just blown away...the hate he holds for him is amazing and you made it very realistic. The line he said the Vegeta would make you invent flaws about yourself...ahh that was ver good.
I do fear what is going to happen. I really love this fic. I am just dwelling on the fact that this is Goku...Goku! Thinking these horrid things and even he seems slightly surprised about it at times. Wondering how this happened when he tried so hard to stay innocent...
I have to say, this may only be 2 chapters, but it is one of the best written fics I have ever read.
Just love how real/alive the characters are.
And I am sorry about your car accident. I do hope you make a safe and speedy recovery...
take care and
keep up the excellence...
^.*
-MB-

Wow...I mean this is incredible. That was some of the best discription I have every read thus far in life. I love that your Goku is real and three dimensional and that your Vegeta didn\'t turn out to be a goodie good. It all seemed too easy in the show...but alas...it was intended for children. I must remember that, but I do love and apprieciate you interpertation of these fabulous characters. it pit patiently for more.