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by Camaro

person ~anz~ ^_~ !!!
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I regret that I can't remember what I wrote before...something about faith, love, courage and persistent perseverance! Well the human mind and psyche doesn't work that way...we always forget...unless it's painful.

It's hard to believe that a year has passed...my how time flies...since i first read this story. It along with a couple of others...was one of the first i read... being a yaoi novice and all... and it was damn good. To this day I have no idea what attracted me...but I can say this...friendship ended up being the result.

This is one of the best fic's I have ever read. It's about relationships...with one's self, one's environment and others. It's also about forgiveness...forgiving and having the ability to forgive...and love.

What can one say about love? Love is all ... And redemption! In the end all were redeemed by love....

This was the best tale of 'THE WORLD THE FLESH AND THE DEVIL' I have ever experienced. And trust me it was/is an incredible experience...the humor, the pathos...the paradox...the joy, the pain and the sorrow...

Thank you for sharing your gift with us...

person ~anz~ ^_~ !!!
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I regret that I can't remember what I wrote before...something about faith, love, courage and persistent perseverance! Well the human mind and psyche doesn't work that way...we always forget...unless it's painful.

It's hard to believe that a year has passed...my how time flies...since i first read this story. It along with a couple of others...was one of the first i read... being a yaoi novice and all... and it was damn good. To this day I have no idea what attracted me...but I can say this...friendship ended up being the result.

This is one of the best fic's I have ever read. It's about relationships...with one's self, one's environment and others. It's also about forgiveness...forgiving and having the ability to forgive...and love.

What can one say about love? Love is all ... And redemption! In the end all were redeemed by love....

This was the best tale of 'THE WORLD THE FLESH AND THE DEVIL' I have ever experienced. And trust me it was/is an incredible experience...the humor, the pathos...the paradox...the joy, the pain and the sorrow...

Thank you for sharing your gift with us...

Thank you for your courage...

person Jennji
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Ever since I first started reading it, I was hooked. I was forced to go to MA (Monster Annonymous) to deal with my addiction. It just never seemed to end and my body was going through severe withdrawls...::Coughs::

Sorry bout that Camaro. Love the story, always look forward to your works.

-Jenn
(nutty)
person Dominic Shade
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...mind blowing. I've said it before and now I say it again: this entire fict. is one hell of a mind fuck. And I love it, lol, how sick does that make me? I hope the sequel goes just as well...oh hell, I know it will. You're too good a writer to do a sequel that sucks.

...now I'm going off to have some hot sweaty sex with my 47 yr. old hubby. Mmmm...wrinkles....


Good times and rock on,

Dom
person DeathByFuzzyDice
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!! You sadistic fuck! I LOVE THIS STORY!!! ^^ Write more!!! Its so... epic and blockbusterish!!! KAKAROT LOVES TEH COCK!!! Give him more. You have to make a fucking movie or something cuz the visuals in this story are AMAZING. The first person point of view makes it so much better than most stories, and THE SURPRISE TWIST!!! omg you rock.
person Bulma
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ingenious! Never saw that coming. Hmm...wonder if it truely is "the devils'" heir or if it is Goku's. Wouldn't that just twist the Devil's panties in a terrible knot? I would laugh myself silly, but oh well. Will Kakarott kill Bulma? Hope he can find a way around killing her and end up saving the day.

Kudos!

Hope you can update soon!

Love!

V.M.
person Kat
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, you\'re back!!!!! And you posted such an amazing new chapter too^-^!! So glad to see your work again, this is truly the best story I have ever read!!!!
person ~anz~
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yippee!!! like a glass of water in the desert for a dying man! What took you so long? I missed this!!!

this is great! can\'t wait to read the next chapter!!!!

love the twists and turns...

this ride ain\'t over yet!!!!

Thanks!
person chayron
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bulma is pregnant, and Goku agreed to go to hell?! And what will that change, that his decision? Though not intentionaly but he blazed a road to hell for himself, but what does he expect to change by going to hell? He wants to be punished, but hey... isn\'t that selfish?

Eagerly waiting for more!
person Whoa
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just whoa

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