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Okay, first and foremost (but only because it\'s at the end of this chapter) AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! NO! She can\'t be preganant with his child. What a horrible mess!

I find it very interesting that thoughts of his child and his dead wife would bring Bulma to mind. *ponders*

Now on to the most important part of this chapter (at least in my oppinion). The dragonballs. \"The road to hell is paved with good intentions,\" and Goku is just now seeing what that means. I know he meant to do right when he would wish the planet or it\'s people back, but I until now I don\'t think he had ever thought about the consequences, the after math. Of course, those other times, it had been one bad/evil person doing the distruction, and it was probably okay for people to go about living their lives. Difficult, especially if they had managed to get through the line at Lord Yama\'s gate and met family members long gone, but liveable, knowing that even though they\'d have to die again they would see those family members second (third, fourth?) time they died.

However, this time, it wasn\'t someone they didn\'t know who had killed them. This time the enemy, although influenced by another, was themselves. YES, that would cause mass lunicy. I couldn\'t imagine bringing them back either after the Devil gave me that little insight. Just the thought that I was what I had planned to do would make me want to vomit also.

Ah... now to the last thing I found interesting. Kakarott\'s conceed. Very nicely done. I can just imagine someone with that much power being that in love with themselves. I have to wonder if he\'s felt that way at every transformation he\'s gone through.

Excellent points of veiw and insights in this chapter. Leaves a person with a lot to think about. Well done!

I Love IT!!!! Update soon!!I can\'t wait for the next chapter!!!

Ok, sweetheart, I\'m done, and let me tell you, I\'m still in awe at your talents.

Looking forward to seeing you later. :)

Hi baby.

I\'m just getting to chapter nineteen right now, and I have a lot to say, but I\'m not quite sure how to word it. Some of what I want to say shouldn\'t be said on here, so I\'ll save it for later. I was thinking about you today, oddly enough, while my husband was asking me about how my stories were going. He asked me if I had done any freestyles lately. (Stream of consciousness writings.) I really haven\'t because I feel so bare when I write them.

This story... It\'s horrible. And it\'s so beautiful. Painfully real. And yet so fake. You\'ve taken the powerful division between good and evil and you\'ve ripped the line from between them, making them mesh together and become grey. Sexuality is the outlet. It is not the reason. While we strive for the ultimate reason to live, we fall into traps, and sometimes, I wonder to myself if the traps themselves are what makes us live.

I\'ll continue on tomorrow when I\'m not so tired. Be well.

I\'ve gotta stop and review chapter 34. I would like to point out that I am by no means religious, nor do I believe this is a religious fiction, but sweetheart, this chapter brought me to tears. People expect God to be sitting on a pedastal when he is right here among us. Powerful idea... Great chapter.

this isn\'t the sort of sory i\'d normally read and i will admit i\'m finding it hard to enjoy because its just not the type of story i\'m into.
you\'re writing style is excellent and the characters are beautifully written. I think thats why I continued to keep reading your story because the style and the way in which the story has been written makes me want to see where this story ends up. its a fantastic piece of writting.

Hope everything is alright with your PC (or maybe you got a new one), and soon we\'ll see more of \"Monster\". Eagerly waiting for an update!!!

This spout is getting too serious, I am glad to see you checking the reveiws and responding so it must have hit coreto leave such a long reply. Call me childish or an idiot all you want but it is funny for me to leave such a long response! I hope this protest thing works or whatever so you can complete this story . Good Luck!

I probably shouldve guessed you wre pulling that. You\'ve done that before! Email me when the next chapter is up ok?!

So, I am an idiot if I want to express this from a different point of view? Share a comment and get called an idoit,huh? So what if it was in general still you are doing and it makes you look like a Hypocrite! I actually like your story and just wanted too share my pov. I did not know this was going to turn into some argument, bitch.
Love to see yor response!