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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, this story is fucking gorgeous. It\'s like a novel, it\'s like a movie, it\'s like a porno all in one. It\'s so amazing, for the past two hours I\'ve been sitting here on the edge of this seat just.... enraptured by this fucking great story. Please update. Man, I\'d love some visuals too. Has anyone done any fanart for this story?
Love, Fuzzy.
Love, Fuzzy.
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September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I love your story and I can honestly say that it\'s one of the best fanfics that I\'ve ever read. It\'s addictive and hard to put down, even after I\'ve finished the last available chapter. Please post a more soon so that I can feed the beast. Thank you.
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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw, I\'m sorry that your computer is out of commission. We know that you aren\'t a negligent author and we all hope that things get better for you soon.
We love you Camaro!
Love ya babe!
Vegeta\'s Mate
We love you Camaro!
Love ya babe!
Vegeta\'s Mate
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A virus? That sucks so much (I\'m in the same situation). It\'s all good those things happen thanks for the warning.
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is really deep. but it\'s true. mankinds biggest enemy...is mankind itself.
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sorry to hear about the virus, had the same prob...had to get my entire harddrive wiped....
will be waiting with baited breath for your next installment....*has box of kleenex and 12 pack of pretzels on standby*
stay in continued good health
~Anz~
will be waiting with baited breath for your next installment....*has box of kleenex and 12 pack of pretzels on standby*
stay in continued good health
~Anz~
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, so that explains why you hadn\'t updated since the 7th of July. I was beginning to wonder. Well that makes sense. The same thing had happened to me almost 6 months ago. I had to replace my Harddrive, then I found out that I needed a much larger harddrive (10 GB go much faster then one would think) so my dad and I went out and bought me a much larger harddrive. Don\'t worry, I am patient, and I will be checking in from time to time. I hope you can get it fixed soon. Good luck.
Love,
Cat Youkai
Love,
Cat Youkai
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hm...virus by your roomate huh? You know...I could make her disappear.... All I need is the word and your troubles will be over....
Good times and rock on,
Dom
Good times and rock on,
Dom
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August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*gonk* Alright! I shall await your brilliant return! *jabs fist in the air*
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So I have read all of Dark Angel and now I have finally caught up in Monster. I see similarities between the two stories when it comes to the styles of writing. Also with religion strongly standing out within both stories. I really enjoy this story. It is different from Dark Angel because it is Dragon Ball Z but in its rawest form. Dark Angel was all about the love between two people and how they come together. Monster, from what I can tell is good over coming evil through love. Love not just between two people but also the love for one\'s self. It is quite poetic. How Goku and everyone else must overcome the Devils influence on the human race.
Another aspect I really enjoyed was making Vegeta and Zarbon took forms of Titus and Aries. I was really stumped as to where Goku had seen such creatures before. I was definitely entranced by their characters. How you made Satan take control over Vegeta\'s body. Very witty. I am amazed however that Satan would succumb himself to future punishment from Vegeta for even looking at Bulma with sick intentions. Although, when Chi Chi was on the bed, I was not surprised. I saw that coming for some reason. How Satan was putting her down and making her look bad in Goku\'s eyes. Also, at the picnic, I read between the lines. I would have expected Goku to catch on, but obviously he is 100% pure macho male.
I think my favorite part was when Goku was with Bulma. Camaro, you really showed how much love comes from friendships. Especially the friendship between Bulma and Goku. Their affair doesn\'t even seem very out of character. It would seem that if the DBZ writers wanted to show the characters as realistic they would have shown the deep love that Goku had for Bulma.
Another part that I really enjoy about you is that you won\'t let any one person put you down. In Dark Angel you seemed to question your writing skills and now you know how good you are. That the only reason people don\'t like your stories is because they know they can\'t write anything like you. That they could only possess a sliver of talent that you hold. I actually find it rather influencing. Yet, I am a strange soul in this world filled with stereotypes. ALso, covering the topic of FFN since you seem pretty crushed that they could not understand your talent. That is the site where I first discovered your writing along with many more aspiring authors. I think because of complaining parents and jealous readers I believe that stories had to be monitored closely. FFN used to be the place to go to find pieces of work that one like myself could only dream about writing. Now, however, those authors have slowly begun to remove themselves from the internet because they lost the freedom and the hope to write and post their pieces of work. I\'m proud of you for sticking around and showing the world you aren\'t a quitter even when it gets hard.
I\'m enjoying Monster more than I thought I would when I first started to read it. So keep updating and I hope that you can write more stories just as creative as Monster and Dark Angel.
Love,
Cat Youkai
Another aspect I really enjoyed was making Vegeta and Zarbon took forms of Titus and Aries. I was really stumped as to where Goku had seen such creatures before. I was definitely entranced by their characters. How you made Satan take control over Vegeta\'s body. Very witty. I am amazed however that Satan would succumb himself to future punishment from Vegeta for even looking at Bulma with sick intentions. Although, when Chi Chi was on the bed, I was not surprised. I saw that coming for some reason. How Satan was putting her down and making her look bad in Goku\'s eyes. Also, at the picnic, I read between the lines. I would have expected Goku to catch on, but obviously he is 100% pure macho male.
I think my favorite part was when Goku was with Bulma. Camaro, you really showed how much love comes from friendships. Especially the friendship between Bulma and Goku. Their affair doesn\'t even seem very out of character. It would seem that if the DBZ writers wanted to show the characters as realistic they would have shown the deep love that Goku had for Bulma.
Another part that I really enjoy about you is that you won\'t let any one person put you down. In Dark Angel you seemed to question your writing skills and now you know how good you are. That the only reason people don\'t like your stories is because they know they can\'t write anything like you. That they could only possess a sliver of talent that you hold. I actually find it rather influencing. Yet, I am a strange soul in this world filled with stereotypes. ALso, covering the topic of FFN since you seem pretty crushed that they could not understand your talent. That is the site where I first discovered your writing along with many more aspiring authors. I think because of complaining parents and jealous readers I believe that stories had to be monitored closely. FFN used to be the place to go to find pieces of work that one like myself could only dream about writing. Now, however, those authors have slowly begun to remove themselves from the internet because they lost the freedom and the hope to write and post their pieces of work. I\'m proud of you for sticking around and showing the world you aren\'t a quitter even when it gets hard.
I\'m enjoying Monster more than I thought I would when I first started to read it. So keep updating and I hope that you can write more stories just as creative as Monster and Dark Angel.
Love,
Cat Youkai