rate_review Reviews

The notes at the beginning and end were very well put. The chapter itself was incredible. It\'s good to see there\'s a person out there who can make such an original story for yaoi. You\'re right, most yaoi stories are all about love. I can see I won\'t be seeing that in this story. Good. I don\'t rely on reviews much, either. They\'re nice to get, though! ^ ^ Well, I\'m off to read the next chapter!

Augh! Simply torturous... you know how to drive a person mad. I waited so long for chapter 36... and now that I have it I\'m left with ANOTHER cliff hanger.... I\'m going to print this out and add it to my other printed mosnter pages... and start all over again... don\'t hear me complaing ^_^

Keep it up.. I\'m curious as to what form goku is in now... It could be another Super saiya-jin... or somethign you completly came up with. Although when the Devil said that he was completly gorgeous my jaw hit my desk. After all that! Well I can\'t say I\'m surprised I acutally expected him to say something similar...

Well I hope for more.
Veor-Chan

~puddle of drool~ 8-P~ Damn, Goku sounds extra tastey! ~mumbles to herself about yummy Goku~

One word: AWESOME!

*BOUNCES* Oh, this was GREAT. *drools* The fight scene was SO discriptive. *nods like a loon* I haven\'t read a fight scene like this EVER!!! Even the previous ones you have written pale in comparison.

O.o Words for the transformation into SSJ 4? Hmmmm, I missed something somewhere. *shrugs* I liked it anyway. Of course, I am assuming this is SSJ 4.

Unbelieveable... And that is suppose to be a compliment!

These words are priceless:

“Why do you persist?” he gasped.
“Because,” I smirked. “I like watching you sweat on top of me.”

Wonderful chapter again! The description of Goku’s body changing was simply absorbing! The pain and Goku’s thoughts that you described! Beautiful.

Dear Camaro,

(continuing previous ass-kissing)

Ahem, I regret to inform you that I actually won\'t be praising your glorious fiction, because people have already done that. Niether will I \'flame\' such a work, because I deplore such actions against an obviously beautiful thing.

So instead I will do what no other reviewer has done...I\'m gonna hit on you.

\'Camaro, it\'s so cold...let me use your thighs as ear muffs?\'

\'Did I mention I\'m doing a survey on the taste of vaginas? Would you like to be a participant?\'

\'We could make a porno film while we have sex...you don\'t want to? Well that\'s okay, we don\'t have to tape it.\'

\'You have a beautiful voice...I bet it would sound even better muffled by my pussy.\'

\'If you\'ve lost your virginity...can I have the box it came in?\'

\'What do you say to us making like Winnie-the-Pooh so I can get my face stuck in your honey jar?\'

And my favorite line:

\'Excuse me, but can I impregnate you with my demon spawn?\'


Ha! Beat that reviewers! Lol...that\'s right, I had nothing better to do...plus Camaro is one hot piece of ass.


Good times and rock on,

Dom

Whoa...what happened! It\'s so wonderful to see that you\'ve updated...

This is so compelling.

Beautiful. Absolutely, purely, geniusly, beautiful. The intellectual violence in this story is almost unrivaled in any fic I have ever read. It has such a profound thought provoking writing style. I loved it. If you haven\'t already, you should read chibi catherine\'s ....and in the dark places which you can find at www.members.fortunecity.com/uiggu/#dbz.

Beautiful. That is truely the only word that I can think of to describe this chapter. I really love the way that Goku can see the sparks of life and energy that flow through everything, I wonder if he was possessed by god....does god possess people? Or is it more like he \"recieved the holy ghost\" as the christians say? ~scratches her chin~ Hm, I must think about that question a bit more. Wonderful read, very smooth, flowing chapter. I am desperate to read more.


Love ya babe!

V.M.