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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I wish you would finish the story. I think is very good and should be completed.
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August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think your story is excellant!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please please please please please please update ssssssssssssooooooooooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!
Pandora
Pandora
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September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i know that it\'s been a lone while but i wanted to know if you are EVER going to finish this story.i like the v/p stories.but people never finish them why i don\'t know but here is another one not done.i hope that you can get over your writers block soon...please update....
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May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this ficcie.
It is very funny! Especially Goku saying he breathes all the time..-_- lmao I almost died when I read that.
But I think it is all coming along reallll. ll. I love the chemistry between these 4 characters. I even felt a little sad for Kihra\'s homelife. Oh and the whole video game scene..loved it.
How could you end the 3rd chap like that O_O!!!! You better update soon!
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It is very funny! Especially Goku saying he breathes all the time..-_- lmao I almost died when I read that.
But I think it is all coming along reallll. ll. I love the chemistry between these 4 characters. I even felt a little sad for Kihra\'s homelife. Oh and the whole video game scene..loved it.
How could you end the 3rd chap like that O_O!!!! You better update soon!
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April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A noteworthy and intruiging fanfiction so far, judging from the first few chaps
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April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Me likey! Please update soon.