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for Bejiita Unattached

by RenaSama

person j
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"and it was wonderful\" That last line always gets me, no matter how many times I read this story. Even now, years after I read it the first time, I haven\'t let go. Weird. (Bravo)
person chayron
schedule June 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I was waiting for so long for you to finish this story. Now i can say - it was awesome! Thank you for pleasant time! And - write something more! Please...:)
person macha
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating, and finishing the fic. I like it very much. I was wondering why Chi Chi was wearing the nubmer 5. Thanks for answering that.

I\'ll be hoping for more fics to come from you. Thanks.
person Hecate
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve reviewed before on FF.net but its so much better on this site so I thought I\'d review here. ^_^

That was a beautiful ending, made me all emotional. !_!
You had me worried theI thI thought Gokuu was leaving Bejiita for Bulma. But I shouldn\'t have doubted, Just like Bejiita shouldn\'t have.

\'\"You know what!? F@*& this game!\" he says throwing the controller down in disdain, pouting before slapping his hands over his mouth. He looks around wildly for my mother. Who absolutely never tolerated profanity in this house.\' - I sympathise with them, I have to abide the same rule in my house. (U_U;)

I am glad Bulma is doing better, hopefully this \'psychiatrist\' will help her find happiness.

I a little sad that this fic has ended, but this fic will always be one of my favourites! ^-^

~Hecate18~
person Hecate
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve reviewed before on FF.net but its so much better on this site so I thought I\'d review here. ^_^

That was a beautiful ending, made me all emotional. !_!
You had me worried there, I thought Gokuu was leaving Bejiita for Bulma. But I shouldn\'t have doubted, Just like Bejiita shouldn\'t have.

\'\"You know what!? F@*& this game!\" he says throwing the controller down in disdain, pouting before slapping his handsr hir his mouth. He looks around wildly for my mother. Who absolutely never tolerated profanity in this house.\' - I sympathise with them, I have to abide the same rule in my house. (U_U;)

I am glad Bulma is doing better, hopefully this \'psychiatrist\' will help her find happiness.

I a little sad that this fic has ended, but this fic will always be one of my favourites! ^-^

~Hecate18~
person macha
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please, please don\'t make Goku go back to Chi Chi. That would be evil.

I liked the lemon. Yuuuuummmmm.
person macha
schedule May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m still reading, and still liking this story. I don\'t have much of a comentary though. Except the apple part, I really liked the apple part.
person macha
schedule May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I found chapter 12 kind of sad. I guess it\'s to be expected though. Stealing some one elses boyfriend isn\'t the best way to stay best friends.

Can\'t wait to see what happens when the guys go to see their sons.
person macha
schedule May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am glad that the boys decided to go see there dads. And that whole situation is the reason I liked this chapter.

I hope Bulma finds some \'\' s\' soon. Professional or another love in her life. Either way.
person macha
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter. It seems as though it is a set up for up coming chapters, and how Goten\'s and Goku\'s relationship has been effected, and the possiblilities of them rebuilding their relationship.

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