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Now THAT\'S a lemon.

Hope to see more soon.

I think I have said this in another review,(yours or Cards I don\'t know) but, Eeeeeeeeeeeeeek. I am so embarassed for him/them/her, but I can\'t stop reading.

You are writtinveryvery tan web web here. As a matter of fact, this could be one of my problems. I think you have managed to get me glued the the chair.

Are you planning on untaggling this anytime soon? Or are you going to let the bug twitch in the web for a while. (Sorry if that was over dramatic, don\'t let it affect the story please.)

U evil person u, ... Y do u put up the chapters so slowly?! I\'ve seen this fic before! I know I have, cuz I know what haaaaappppppppeeeeennnnnnssssss ^^. But I hate having to go look it up somewhere else.... c_c Ok, I\'m lazy, but I\'m not the writer! ><

Eeeeek! How embarassing. I guess you had to explain some of the \'why\'s\', and you did. And although I am very embarassed for Goku right now, you wrote that chapter very well.

I don\'t know if this explains who is further gone between Goku and Vegeta, but it would seem as though Goku has been dealing with it longer....or has he?

I am hoping that there is a reason (aka plotst) st) that you wrote that Goten had witnessed almost everything.

Well, as usual, I hope that you update soon.

Yeah! You continued. I love this story. Poor Gohan, wanting the Prince and not getting him. It\'s probably for the better though, if Goku could still smell Vegeta on Gohan even weeks after \'the incident\'.

So it would seem that both of the pure bloods are obsessed. I do kind of wonder who is more far gone though. And why they haven\'t gotten together. *I smell plot*

I hope you continue, I can see this story going far.