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I really enjoyed this story. I always thought that Kakkarot and Vegeta should get together. I especially enjoyed the fact that you used lots of details in the story.

Just wanted to say that I loved it!! Really loved it!!! *grins happilly* Muchly drool worthy material, nice job ^_^

I liked :)

-Hudine-

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Wowie. It takes a lot of work to write a decent 1st person narrative. But i must say, that was pretty good. Hn. Pretty good indeed.

*wink * Anyway, I think you\'re doingd, ad, and I would give you some \'constructive Criticism\' instead of all praise, but I can\'t think of anything \'wise\' to say. Lol.

But it was good. I like that word \'girth.\' I\'ve always thought that was a good word. (Yes, I am an odd bird.) And the lemon was hot. \'Fleshy pleasure\' that was very nice. Love that phrase. Anyway, seeing how its very late, and I sound like Rainman (definitely, definitely) I\'m going to go away now.

Tooties.
Card ;)

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That was very good! I loved the lemon. The whole ficcie was nicely written.
Although I am kinda sad for ChiChi b/c Goku...LoL ok who am I kidding I am not sad for her. Vegeta and Goku belong together! And I can\'t believe Bulma, cheating on Vegeta, what is she delirious????
But Vegeta did make me sad in this fic, I hate to see my Prince hurting for any reason. I do hope that Goku did heal his pain...but how can I know for sure..unless you write a sequel?
I know, I know you said this was complete, but I really do to see potential for a sequel...
Anyway you did excellent and I loved it all!

^.*
-MB-

I liked it - it was nice and sweet and loving. I do have to say that I am not a fan of songfics - I totally skipped the lyrics to get to the story. My only criticism would be the need for a beta-reader - some of the errors would be caught by spell-check, but not all. I hope to see more of your work.

I am definetly sending lovin\'. I like this fic. You did a great job.