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March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome story and i hope you update soon. I\'m more of an EdxEnvy fan but then again its probably because i havent read a story that does Roy and Ed justice when it comes to stuff like this so keep up the good work and you\'ll convert me fully.
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February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great! I hope you continue with a new chapter fast. I can\'t wait.
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February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was adorable. This is the first Roy/Ed fic I\'ve ever read, and I have to say, it was a good one to start with. I can see most of this happening actually! And I got a good idea to draw something from a scene in the first chapter..so i\'ll see if I can\'t do that.. Email me if you\'re actually interested in getting the drawing I\'m going to do.. Owari!
~SilentChaos89
~SilentChaos89
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February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yum Yum in my tum tum
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February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love your fic!!! Are you going to update? Oh and I had one question... I can\'t find the first chap to your fic... Do u have one or am I just loosing my mind? I started reading when Ed was on the train and was thinking about his\"first\" time with Roy.... Was that the beginning? hmm... *Crashes into wall* I am stupid.... Plz e-mail me...
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February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! please keep writing. I went to fanfic.net and all the stories there have \'careful\' lemons. I love how you go through and describe it and are able to still have some plot to it. Perfect ^_^
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February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...I love it! you seriously need to write more. I\'m hooked!
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January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lol, hey it\'s AFF.net so anything\'s allowed to turn into smut (AS LONG AS IT\'S GOOD SMUT!). Quite entertaining, though I am wondering about how Ed was acting in the beginning of their encounter. It seemed a tad OC, oh well.
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January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just one thing about chapter two: Hawkeye never left the Colonel\'s office.
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January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh please do continue.