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February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really like it so far. Please update soon!!
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December 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve read this story to this chapter and as a fanfiction writer myself I must say I LOVE IT! This story just goes to show how if 2 people who have so much in common, fate brings them together. I love stories like this, and I hope you update soon!
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December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I check regularly....love this one...thank you!
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October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i really liked this chapter.trunks was great with her son. i hope they take care of her ex real soon...update...maria
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October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great chapter.i like how he spoke to her son..i only hope that they take care of her ex real soon...please update soon..maria
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September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yaaaay, another chapter! OH, but you made me wait so long! *scolds* heh heh.
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June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not bad. I think you should continue this.
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May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
can you e-mail me...i\'m almost in the same boat as you except for a few things..please e-mail me and we will talk...
your not alone at alllllll!!!!!!!!!!maria
your not alone at alllllll!!!!!!!!!!maria
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May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH my god. This story, though it seems a bit rushed, is exquisitely written! It is truly rare to find someone with good writing talent! I like where the story is going and how you have based yourself on the character of the story. I have done some similar in my story \"The Day I Met Vegeta\" Perhaps you could check it out some time. It\'s okay to give criticism too, because that enables me to improve my ability.
As I read, I was practically chewing at the pillow in lap, eyes darting over the words to hurriedly find out what would happen next. I found that there was nothing after chapter 5 and I had to restrain my wail of despair so as not to wake my mother and her companion. ^_^; AWG, how could you do this to me? I\'m trembling anxiously, dying to find out what comes next. ¬_¬ *dunks herself in cold water* OI jeez, talk about a cliffhanger!
Anyway, I really want to let you know how much I appreciate your story! It\'s wonderful to know that among the masses of youths, there are the adults who can enjoy the same as them! Thumbs up! *smiles* You know..just reading this makes me want to get to know you! Haha, I\'m silly... I\'m always eager to meet new people who like the same things that I do! Heh, I\'m hopelessly alone half the time bec all all of my \'real\' friends (the few that there are) all have lives that I seem to lack. Work, College, The Military...Religious and somewhat intimidating legalistic opinions... yadda yadda... You get the picture.
*clears her throat* I\'ll stop rambling! Just letting you know that you ARE indeed being stalked by the fanfiction sporker hel hell! ^_^; Nah, being facetious about the hell thing... *rambling again* Ha hah. *sporks you for more* I anticipate the next installment. Give me an IM some time; what harm is there in sharing friendly banter? AIM: VegeChanZ Yim: VegeChanZ@yahoo.com
Your newest fan,
VChan
As I read, I was practically chewing at the pillow in lap, eyes darting over the words to hurriedly find out what would happen next. I found that there was nothing after chapter 5 and I had to restrain my wail of despair so as not to wake my mother and her companion. ^_^; AWG, how could you do this to me? I\'m trembling anxiously, dying to find out what comes next. ¬_¬ *dunks herself in cold water* OI jeez, talk about a cliffhanger!
Anyway, I really want to let you know how much I appreciate your story! It\'s wonderful to know that among the masses of youths, there are the adults who can enjoy the same as them! Thumbs up! *smiles* You know..just reading this makes me want to get to know you! Haha, I\'m silly... I\'m always eager to meet new people who like the same things that I do! Heh, I\'m hopelessly alone half the time bec all all of my \'real\' friends (the few that there are) all have lives that I seem to lack. Work, College, The Military...Religious and somewhat intimidating legalistic opinions... yadda yadda... You get the picture.
*clears her throat* I\'ll stop rambling! Just letting you know that you ARE indeed being stalked by the fanfiction sporker hel hell! ^_^; Nah, being facetious about the hell thing... *rambling again* Ha hah. *sporks you for more* I anticipate the next installment. Give me an IM some time; what harm is there in sharing friendly banter? AIM: VegeChanZ Yim: VegeChanZ@yahoo.com
Your newest fan,
VChan
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April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is by far the most best trunks/oc fic ive read so far.Im sry about your troubles too.This story is very good and I hope that u update soon.