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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the way you present the thoughts of each character.
The mystery of this story gets more and more intense as I read it. Keep it up.
The mystery of this story gets more and more intense as I read it. Keep it up.
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I dunno what\'s more fun to red, your story ir the review you got from Lady Blue... O.O
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Girl Please write some more of this story it tis one of my Favorites. It saddens me that you haven\'t written any more. *CRYS* I NEED SOMETHING TO FILL THESE DAYS OF MONOTONY!!!!!!!!!! Oh dude and when I left my number It is there to be used. Don\'t think twice of calling it. I may not answer when it rings but I am super good at getting back to calls!
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whats going on this is werid update if u will
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November 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ok when u r going to update ive been waiting for forever i luv ur story so please updtae soon
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September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just, wow. This was probably the most origninal fiction I've read in a long time. I went searchior aor a story to skim through tonight, and I stumbled on this peice of work. I quickly realized this isn't a story one can just "skin through". Though a few typo's confused me at times, I was very impressed with this (Hence why I'm taking the time to review). I'm compelled. At this point though, I have no clue what-so-ever as to where you might be going with all this. Of course, that's what makes it all worth the while. You have a very good story here. I hope you continue it soon.
~AngelKitty
~AngelKitty
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September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey i love your story i wish for u to keep it up and finish this story
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August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok I was bord so I just like Clicked on a story and I was like hmmm this seems interesting...I read it and it wasn't until I got to the bottom of the first page that I relized that this was your story!!! I like it its all like eerrie and such. I am really enjoying it I hope you update soonly. It would be a cryin shame ifin ya don't.
Noel
Noel
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August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hi i love the stories so far i cant wait for you to finish it please be soon it is so good
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August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think the only reasegetegeta isn't allowed to talk wit Goku is because they are the only ones in that sick world to not believe it. Whether or not they are dellusional about their belief has yet to be seen.
The part that had me concerned is when Chichi suddenly went to choke the Prince. Hmmm, they would save him from destroying himself, but nott a t a finger if the damage was inflicted by someone else? I am thinking the goal in this, if it is a strange consperacey, isn't death then. Otherwise they would have let him go with the blood down the drain. What would the benefit be if 'they' did convence Vegeta he was insane then?
The part that had me concerned is when Chichi suddenly went to choke the Prince. Hmmm, they would save him from destroying himself, but nott a t a finger if the damage was inflicted by someone else? I am thinking the goal in this, if it is a strange consperacey, isn't death then. Otherwise they would have let him go with the blood down the drain. What would the benefit be if 'they' did convence Vegeta he was insane then?