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Oh my God. I don't want to sound insane or something, but what you write... it deeply frightens me, to the point where I'm curled up in a ball, whimpering, but unable to stop reading, with some sick fascination forcing me to come back and read, and re-read. It's terrifying. And I don't know why. Normally I'm fine with insanity fics, with blood and gore, and especially with the hurt-comfort part of a lot of G/V fics. But... I don't know... I don't knowmoremore. It's become so warped. I even have my own ideas, of things equally disturbing, which make me sick to my stomach; thoughts of a madman! Your writing- when you have a tragic ending, in your fics, it does something to me, and I cry openly. I shouldn't be this affected by it. It's weak of me. I don't understand...
I'm sorry if I seem crazy. But I feel like I've lost something. I don't know what it was- there's no way it could be innocence, I think- but whatever I lost, I don't know if I want to have it back. Inside of me, deep inside of me, there's something trying to break free. And I am scared to let it out. What if I'm crazy? I don't even know if I don't want to be crazy anymore. It m me me quiver with fear to read things you write, because I can imagine, perfectly, doing the exact same things myself, no matter how horrifying or bloody.
Gods, I sound disturbed.
I even fear you. Sometimes I doubt your very existence; I imagine that some supernatural thing, some god is turning this writing out. It is something horrible to me, because it is true.
I am desperate to understand you. I wonder if you intended to have this effect on your readers, and if your intent was malicious, or if you just wanted to catch up the readers in an amusing idea. I'd be relieved and honored if you e-mailed me. Sorry to waste your time on this review.

Okay, so something is terribley WRONG, and who ever is responsible(in the fic of course) doesn\'t have all of the bugs figured out. I don\'t think that it was planned for Goku to realize that he wasn\'t a doctor and to go all drooly.

So, we got a clue, I am guessing, about the humming noise. I certainly don\'t know what the noise has to do with what, but I suppose that will be explained later.

I\'m still disturbed by this fic, and loving every moment of it!

Oww...what a loverly twist. But I must know...what the hell is going on. What the hell was ChiChikingking about. The chapter was short but I agree I don\'t think my poor brain could have taken anymore. *sigh* so I\'ll just wait...patiently...*growls*

Very glad you updated!

All these people were crazy! Even his damn doctor- that happened to look like Kakkarot- no- EXACTLY like him! He just wanted to pull his hair and scream.--aww poor Vegeta. Yeah those people are crazy. I am slighlty afraid of them and intrigued (sp?)

A gasp came from his doctor and he seemed as if he woke from some strange nightmare--*is scared* What the heck is his problem?!?!?!?!

\"Mister B-Vegeta…? It’s time... time for you to go back to your… your room…\" --*gasp* He practically said Vegeta!!! *is very suspicous*

He could barely see Kakkarot but he did manage to see his eyes were glazed over, tears fell from them and drool was hanging from his parted lips. --O_O!!!! *is very freaked out hiding in closet* I thought Kakarott was the one in power and even he seems to be losiis mis marbles or gaining his marbles...not sure...

And Bulma...she is the new doctor *gasp*..WHAT IS GOING ON!!!!!

UGH!!!!!! Why did you stop there!!!! *throws computer* I am so confused!!! What is going on! I need to know!!!!

Lmao..stripping for the computer eh...I won\'t ask but I am sure Ryan knows alll about that....^.~

Please update soon..or else...
look at me threatening the person who created Finch...*sighs* I really should watch who I threaten...
how about this..
Please update soon and I will give you...Ryan! Yeah I will wrap him up and send him to you via federal express!!!!!

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you know this story really messes up my mined. Has me wondering what is real. And Goku with needles? *cringes*

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Oh this is getting sooooooooooooooooo good!

At least for now, he’d rest it off and once again hope that this is wall a dream an that he’d wake up in his warm bed. --This was a heart warming thought and the sentences after it also about Trunks playing video games and so on..we get the sense that he is a very good dad...because he know his childrens daily activities..even knows that Bulma is...uh...screwing that desert bandit...^_^

And he had also found it odd that when he slept that he had no dreams, no thoughts, it was oblacblack--hm...that is very strange indeed. I wonder what these doctors are playing at.

\"Good morning Mister Begeta.\" Vegeta scowled as the Kakkarot impersonator said his name wrong yet again.--lmao...*shakes fist at Goku* He better say that name right or else!!!

If he was even a man… --O.O I hope he is a man...j/k

Awww when Vegeta felt the smile tug at his lips that was so cute and when it faded b/c he heard the last part of Goku\'s sentence that was even cuter! But sad too b/c that Goku is really creepy I wouldnt want to go for a walk with him either.

it seemed as though he was the only one there beside Kakkarot and the Nameks. --that is VERY strange, I wonder why that is...

White bandages on his wrists. He could see the blood that still tried to leak through. --O_O He\'s not crazy he\'s a l a little unwell...to quote Matchbox 20. But seriously that is slightly alarming I hope the Prince isn\'t trying to kill himself and doesnt know about it...and I hope no one is hurting him either.

We ran some tests on you and you truly believed that you were from this planet called oddly, Planet Begeta-- -_- I hope he isn\'t trying to mock my precious Prince! He isn\'t crazy!!! There really is a planet Begeta..er...Vegeta!!!!

\"You attacked everyone you saw even your wife and kids, claiming they were human… when you yourself are a human.\"--this would explain his lack of power but it seems to easy... \"Af\"After this you’ll have game time with some of the other patients. That sounds nice doesn’t it?\"-- x_x no that does not sound nice...it sounds a lot like what a crazy person would do!!!

\"C-ChiChi?\" --*gasp* what is she doing there!?

HOW DARE YOU END RIGHT THERE!!!! *attempts to strangle you* You know I love this fic!!!!!!!

Gosh, I am getting a brain-ache trying to figure out what is going on. I\'m caught between Vegeta was really \'that\' traumatized that he blocked out the last 3 yrs of his life and thinking maybe it isn\'t real...maybe it is. UGH I JUST DONT KNOW!!!!! I love this fic. And I can\'t wait until the next time you update.

And where are you!!!! I am online!!!!!!!! Get your butt on the comp right now!!! *sobs* I tried to e-mail you and it rejected my e-mail, I was like O_O!!!!!!!!!!!! So I told Ry to e-mail you some stuff for me...I hope he did. Sometimes I want to kick my e-mail...I sent it like 3 times...It took awhile for my brain to understand that it just wasnt getting through to ya... Ooh I read your review to Naruto person and I love Naruto too...I drew Vegeta as Kakashi it\'s pretty kewl...well it\'s not my best art but its ok... Anyway it is 9:22 p.m. and you are still not on..what gives??? And really who am I to be complaining...my computer is an ass! -_- Oh and *gasp* you have a lot to tell us!!!!!!!! I do hope you talk to Ry soon!

As for JayGoose of course I am always watching....mwhahahaha

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Vegeta din\'t try to make a run for it. Why the hell not? I would have. Maybe he wants to know more about what\'s going on, but I think I would have said F-that, and tried to take off.

So, I didn\'t find it disturbing that he was in the same place when he woke up. I DID find it disturbing that it seemed as though he was taking it all with a grain of salt.

Once again I was wrong about where he had been A/U\'d to. I thought, maybe this is HFIL, or just other world, and was expecting all the other patients to be super bad guys like Cell and Buu, but like I said, I was wrong. So, Chi Chi\'s in the mental ward too, huh? Wonder what kind of trouble those two can get into together.

I don\'t know if would call this confusing but it\'s definately crazy! I want to know what the hell is going on and why Goku doesn\'t know Vegeta or that his saiyajin name is Kakarott. And what\'s up with Vegeta\'s power? Update soon!

Cool fic. I do hope it is update soon.

I like it. Poor Vegeta. Is he really insane...is it a dream. I have the sinking suspicion that its not. Poor Veggie. It will be interesting to see when and where other characters make their appearances. I can\'t wait for more.