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i really like it so far. i want to find out if he was like, previously insane and now is in the \'real world\', or if what he thinks is real is and this is something else. i really enjoy your stories. when are you planning on updating Abhor?

Ok first I have to say I am totally loving the title of this fic!

Announcing that he was better than who ever walked in the room. --Liking that alot...seems very unlike his character...and with this we get a very good description of a bit of his personality.

His jaw clenched. Kakkarot wasn’t one to ignore him. --this is very interesting indeed...and I am alreaday feeling badly for Vegeta...and I definitly need to know what is going on. How coldy Goku is acting...and why?

Kakkarot just eyed the paper he wrote upon with a pencil that seemed to have been to hell and back. --He must have been writing like a mad man.wow...I am definately wondering what is up with Goku..and highly creeped out by him...\'doctor Goku\'...

and Kakkarot! Kakkarot is too damn stupid to be a doctor of any sort! --ROFL! I am going to have to agree...well then again I dunno..Goku is full of surprises...

That was when his eyes went wide. Pain?--Feeling pain..that is not a good sign at all. I am very worried and I too, want to know what the f*ck is going on! This is freaking creepy stuff. I don\'t know how it would feel to be Vegeta at this point, but I am pretty sure I would be somewhere along the lines of really hoping thain ain and dreams could collide as one...and that waking up would be the next part of the nightmare...

His fist tightened as he tried to raise his ki- and to his shock… nothing happened. --*GAAHHHAHHH!!!! he has no...*gulp* ki...? Why? WHY!?!?!?!?

I loved Vegeta\'s facts especially Kakarott is here and he is ignoring me. Very sad...and cute. Made me wonder why you chose to write that as one of Vegeta\'s facts...It seems as if that is hurting him that Kakarott is ignoring him. And duh, why wouldn\'t it..just thought it was a wonderful line..almost like confessing some sort of secret love for the man... Maybe not so extreme, but still I loved it...

Or maybe that was heartburn --LoL, oh gosh...how can he worry about heartburn at a time like this?!

There is no one named Kakkarot here.\" ---I have a horrible feeling about this...soemthing I wont say. But that line made me think of it.

\"SHUT UP! Don’t fucking call me Mister Begeta ever again! My name is Veeh-gee-tah!\" --ROFL!!! WOO YEAH!!! you tell them Veeh-gee-tah!!!!! That\'s my Prince!

Maybe if he fell asleep he’d wake from this nightmare, or maybe this was the sick reality…--*sobs* VEGETA!!! No!!! Please be ok!!!!

Man, I am totally loving this fic and I do hope you update in one hour...j/k But I want to know what is going on... This was a very interesting start how can anyone not be intrigued? I love when Goku has that creepy authoritive thing going .the.then I *drool* but seriously very good and well written as always...

Vegeta with no power...
Nameks in this strange hospital...why?
Doctor Goku holding a...NEEDLE!!!! How alarming!!!!!!!

Well...I want to know more...but of course I will be patiently waiting.

And bla...-_- I know I haven\'t talked to you in awhile but you know the deal with that and stuff. Anyway I have been super busy lately. It\'s amazing what you discover when one\'s computer is always acting stupid...I actually went outside...and I hate going outside. It\'s like a plague to me..all that sun, green stuff (like grass and leaves), oh and annoying flowers...not to mention bugs...bleh... but you should see Ryan and Lucas. It\'s so funny...well not really, but they are suffering from what the comp has been doing. Ryan was wanting to kill Aol Lucas wanted to destroy Msn..ahh..it was beautiful...but when I left today for school the messengers were working so...ya know Ry should be on! And if he isn\'t...I am afraid you will have...Lucas to talk to...@_@ ..fun...

and I will talk to you l8ter!

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\'Enjoyed\'? I don\'t think that\'s the word I would use for this chapter. I found it disturbing. Very disturbing to read about the Prince going through all of that.

And having the Nameks show up in that hospital was disturbing also. (Here I was thinking you had A/U\'d him to our world, and there are still Nameks?)

Kakarrot with a needle is also disturbing.

Disturbing enough I want to read the next chapter when you post it!