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i got a bit bored around chapter 6, this isnt a good couple, or pairing or whatever. And most of the chapters are short as hell, and the titles have nothing to do with the chapters at all. In one chapter she is tyed to the bed and in the next chapter she isnt and all of a sudden they are on good terms? You didnt explain any of this to the readers and its very important that the readers understand key elements of the story. All in all, I think you could have done better, I see that you have talent but you stick random crap in your story and you make the female a bitch, how the heck is any sexyness going to happen if she keeps kneeing him in the crotch and acting like a bitch? Anyways, better luck next time this one just isnt doing it for me.

This is a really good story. I really want too know how it ends! Being a fellow writter myself i think that u can go far.

liked it !,liked it !!,liked it !!!! not many jou/\"bulla\" fics around....make some more.......plz..i needs my \"sweaty - nana\" fix!

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that was so touching it made me cry

Pretty good story, but there is some parts that are just too...weird.

OMFG! That was a great story! The ending was soooooooooooo sad. I wanted 2 cry :'(. I um...... sortof did. I luv the songfic at the end. Such a nice touch. I cant get the song or story out of my head now. U must write a sequal or i shall come 2 ur house and um....... do something bad. So im bad with threats. Well anyways, this was my absolute favorite! luv, y should i tell u what my name is?

a sequel sounds great!!
i can't wait to read it!
please put it out soon!
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Mel0Yel0#03
aka rae rae

OMG! The ending was so sad! Man, I feel sorry for 17!!! You so better make a sequel soon! I can't wait to read it! I don't agree so much of the ending, but that just makes the story more interesting! Wow.... I can't wait. Please update soon! What will be the name of the sequel anyways?

OMG! The ending was so sad! Man, I feel sorry for 17!!! You so better maksequsequel soon! I can't wait to read it! I don't agree so much of the ending, but that just makes the story more interesting! Wow.... I can't wait. Please update soon! What will be the name of the sequel anyways?

hey, i've read your story and I think it's awesome! Bulla and 17 make such a cute couple together! It's so romantic! lol. I can't wait until ou write your next chapter, and I hope it's soon! I'll be waiting. And great job on it! ^__^