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August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I love this couple! Bra/17! You have such a great story going on here! DON'T STOP! keep going! I love da story! Hurry on your next chapter! I wanna read it.
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August 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This last chapter was a bit short but good. I was just waiting for the moment when he would snap and attack Bra. I'm just glad you was able to handle things herself. Update again soon!
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August 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great story!! Rarely do I hear of 17/Bra pairings and this one I have to say is excellent. Please update soon!
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May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MAN just when it was getting good LOL anyway update A.S.A.P ok?
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May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another damn cliffhanger huh? So the next one better be a lemon. Anyway it\'s yet another great chapter. Keep writing.
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May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww man! It was gettin\' good! Great job, as always. Keep going. Keep going!!!
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May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Don\'t kill 17! That\'ll up up the whole story! It was just gettin\' good! I guess it ain\'t gon\' be no lemons huh?
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May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Noooooooo!!!!!!! How could you stop?! :\'( Anyway....getting really good...and has been hot for numerous chap. Ca. Can\'t wait for the next one, which I hope is soon!
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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That\'s it Seventeen show the spoilt little wunabitch what living in the sticks is all about!
(Sorry normally I dont really care for seventeen but after reading this, I hope sev teaches that spoilt bitch what\'s real and what\'s not ,damn preppy bitch!
(Sorry normally I dont really care for seventeen but after reading this, I hope sev teaches that spoilt bitch what\'s real and what\'s not ,damn preppy bitch!
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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dayum!! Shit\'s gettin\' hot! Keep it up!\'s \'s see who goes to who first!