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July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
God,that was HOT!!! It is so hard to find a good elricest fanfiction. This fanfiction is definitly the best I have ever read before,and I have read some really great ones!
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Funny.
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July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
TOO MUCH JAPANESE!....BUT FRIGGIN HAWT REGARDLESS! I DO NOT SPEAK JAPANESE! I KNOW SHIT LIKE NIISAN AND SOME OTHERS BUT DAMN YOU USED ALOT! DAMN! DEEEEEEEEEEMN! great story though
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very cute!!! Keep up the good work!!!
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March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done.
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January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Tee hee that was cute. You defintaly made it sound like it was their first time. Keep up the fun! *Peace*Love*Happiness*
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January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Me likey. I mean... uh *Wipes drool from mouth*Its very good! Write more, or I might have to cry! You wouldn\'t want a defenseless girl (yeah, I\'m a guy so what?) to cry now would you?
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January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gin: *is too busy drooling to write a review*
Jin: *walks in* Hey Gin! What\'re you...*starts drooling too*
White Wolf: *pokes head in doorway* Well, they seem to like it. So do I, but I read it once before so I\'m not drooling right now. I did the first time, though. Anyway, hope you write more! Even if it isn\'t this pairing or this fandom, I think you\'re an awsome author. *rereads story and starts drooling*
Jin: *walks in* Hey Gin! What\'re you...*starts drooling too*
White Wolf: *pokes head in doorway* Well, they seem to like it. So do I, but I read it once before so I\'m not drooling right now. I did the first time, though. Anyway, hope you write more! Even if it isn\'t this pairing or this fandom, I think you\'re an awsome author. *rereads story and starts drooling*
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December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please make another story like this or just write more chapters its very good