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What an ass! Gohan should kill him!! (Not really) Poor Pan...being man handled like that! Please update...it\'s getting good!

-Missy

AWWWWWWWW! COME ON YOU CAN\'T Do THAT TO ME!! COME ON UPLOAD MORE!!!!!!! Man just when it was getting good. I hate it when a good story gets going and only like two chapters are uploaded and they\'re short!!! Come on UPLOAD! Oh yeah, aren\'t I supposed to say something else...oh well....keep up with the story, IT\'S GOING GREAT!!!!! :) Cya Phoenixgirl

Please, please, please, please, please, please, please, PLEASE! UPDATE! I hate it when it gets good and noone updates for a really, really, really long time. Oh yeah, stories going great! Keep it up!

Aww, poor Trunks...Pan\'s going to kick his ass! Haha, good first chapter! Keep going!! ^-^