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August 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I have been going back and re reading this. Please, please, please write another chapter! I gotta know what happens next! Pleeeeaaaaaase I beg of you! I'll draw you fan art for this story, I'll try to write a fanfic just for you, I'll try to do whatever I can to have another chapter. Please update. Please?
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March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
not bad...i don\'t like seeing my vegeta killed off and it took me months to breakdown and read this....but you win, this story wasn\'t bad at all.
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May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Angsty! I usually don\'t go for such dark fics or fics where Goku goes evil, but this one really appealed to me for some reason. Seeing him so heartless ans an interesting change. And we need more Goku x Bulma fics out there! I loved Bulma\'s battle between her conscience and the physical pleasure she was feeling, and how Goku was tender and concerned with her pleasure even when he was so ruthless with others. Should you continue it? Hmm... if you have the storyline all planned out (and if G + B can end up together :) I would vote for more chapters. Otherwise I say leave it as a one-shot. I kind of like the sense of mystery and the wonderingt ret remains at the end.
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May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wowzers! This is one hell of a fantastic fic! Goku is soo.....evil!