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May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Gods, I love this story!!!!!!!
That was a fantastic chapter! The tension was just right. Thank you for putting in all the time to write it, and I also thank your beta for her work as well.
Please add me to your mailing list.
That was a fantastic chapter! The tension was just right. Thank you for putting in all the time to write it, and I also thank your beta for her work as well.
Please add me to your mailing list.
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May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Bulma...avoided by her prince for four months. How can Vegeta be so cruel and sexy at the same time. I love it! Keep it coming. Also, can I be added to the mailing list too?
~Kira~
~Kira~
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May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The best B/V I have read so far! keep up the great work and please update! email me when u do
bulma_secrets@yahoo.com
bulma_secrets@yahoo.com
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May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Amazingly well written. I really commend you and have little to no tips to offer. Other then the hope that you will update.
ja\'ne
ja\'ne
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May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Heyyo! First off, I was looking at your title and I was wondering if you have ever seen the movie \"A Love for All Seasons.\" Although most people I ask have never heard of it. (how sad..it\'s such a good movie too)
Anywho, great fic so far. Please update soon.
Anywho, great fic so far. Please update soon.
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May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ABSOLUTELY FABULOUS! Can\'t wait to see the rest!!!
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May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT PUHLEASE WRITE MORE SOON!!
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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love a good BV get toether :) Can\'t wait to read the next.
-Hudine-
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May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I am so glad that you started updating at AFF.net! I was so dissappointed to find that you were dropped from FF.net. I was really hoping that you would start posting here again to make up for it. You are one of the better writers I have read, and I love this fic in particular! You manage to keep Vegeta dark but still hint at what had to have been underneath in order for future events with Bulma to have happened. Definitely not an easy thing to do (not that I have a problem with an OOC Vegeta, many of the fics I like have him out of character). At the same time, you don\'t make him to dark. Some writers get a little to carried away with his dark side. I also like the fact that you portray Bulma as strong and not as a woose or a pushover. Sure she has to deal with her fears and feels afraid on occassion (who wouldn\'t be), but she is not a pushover. Anyway, I am sorry about what happened to you at FF.net! Please keep posting here! ^_^
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May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooh I\'m so glad to see you here Lynn! I so love your writting, you\'re a genius...what can I say that hasn\'t already. Anyways, keep writting and posting your wonderful work!!
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