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Hey there, it's LaRieaux. How have you been doing? Haven't talked to you in a really long time. Send me an email when you get the chance, k? Same one as before, larieaux@aim.com.

Hey there, it's LaRieaux. How have you been doing? Haven't talked to you in a really long time. Send me an email when you get the chance, k? Same one as before, larieaux@aim.com.

Quoting Keanu Reeves...

Whoa!

This is wonderful! Though I never could guess I'd be laughing so much with one of your stories. Well, it's mostly the parts with Bulma and Vegeta's little fights, but the scene at the Irish pub was also priceless. And also Bulma's mom inquiring about Vegeta at the bathroom. The end of chapter 35 was too good for words. Didn't realize it was a work in progress. Are you still updating? I hope you are.

Ouch...all of that triumph, only to have it come crashing down like that. *shakes head*

Reading this chapter was like running a mile while also being on a roller coaster. @.@ Dear kami, what else are you going to put Vegeta and Bulma through?

holy cow!

i fricken love this fic! the style, the way u personafi vegeta.. everything. it makes my day when u update.

this is by far the greatest vegeta fic i have ever read.. its so different. it makes u think in between the lines of the whole story.

so will bulma ever have a kid? er trunks? or this is kinda like ur time line?

but all in all i love it. i have been reading it for a very very long time..

dont ever change!

thank u for the update!!

I...want to cry!! Ah, such a happy chapter and then instantly to sadness. So much angst! Lovely lovely. Great chapter.

Wow...this chapter...was amazingly hot. It's a refreshing thing to read a fanfic that doesn't carefully go into sweet, tender lovemaking, nuzzling and cuddling. No, this chapter leapt right into animalistic crazed sex...and I love it. Lots. I love how you make Bulma such a strong and amazing character. Riddled with a horrible disease she still has this strength to put Vegeta into a state of shock. She seems to match him in both personality and wildness, which makes them such a wondrous couple. Love your details, love your writing style. Quite brilliant.

"I watched the water bead on her beautiful shoulders and back, jealous that anything else could touch her as intimately as I could" I love this line. You have a great way with words that's just astounding. This fanfic makes me love Vegeta and Bulma even more.

And wow....then the angst appears. So sad, I was seriously feeling the tears building. It seems that nothing will ever go well for Vegeta in life. It's like he's doomed for bad luck and continous torment. It's not often that you see Vegeta excited for the baby, and then it's all taken from him. Bulma is suffering, her pregnancy is not going to be good, and this all builds so much on him. Poor guy. So, wow....I'm just rambling. Amazing chapter. I loved it so much, and I am very excited for the next chapter.

Ouch...that's a very terrible thing to have to go through, on both Vegeta's and Bulma's parts.

So, they beat the cancer...I have to wonder what happened after for the story to be going the way it is...for Vegeta to have ended up where he has.

I'm so glad to see these new chapters. there was a while there where I thought this fanfic was over....but it's back and I'm SO HAPPY! I can tell you knew exactly where to go with these chapters. You always have such a good flow of words. I loved the way you portrayed Bulma and Vegeta's pain. you didn't make either of them uncharacteristic or pathetic. It was all very...real. Both characters are so strong, it's amazing. So, good work. I look forward to your next chapters.

This is one of the most capitvating stories I have read...ever. Vegeta speaks with us, not with grunts and only insults, but with a feeling and depth that we've all known was there. With all the revealing of his personal life, you're still bringing his deliciously cocky edge to his tale in a wonderful mix of love, hate, trauma and acceptance.

You are an amazing writer! Each time that I sit here in the dark and read a new chapter, a little film is playing behind my eyes, thanks to your wonderful descriptions and creative mind.

I'm sitting on the edge of my seat as I wait for the next update (please...hurry...this chair is broken already..:( )