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Absolutely amazing read, brilliant!
The depth of it, the amazing insight in psychologie... You've got my deep respect for writing this.
So refreshing to see someone turn away from the classic views of not only Vegeta, but also Bulma, Yamcha and Goku. It's so different, and yet so much more realistic and in character than any other artist has ever painted them.
How you've managed to make this beautyfull puzzle fit so nicely around the actual storyline is a mystery to me, your fantasy seems endless.. And perfect in how right and logical it is.

Thank you.

at first i didn't really get into this story but as things went along i really got into it. it's a great read, very well written.

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!! :) The best chapter EVER! Okay, sorry, a little enthusiatic there.

As horrified as I was to read and think Vegeta might actually kill those idiots in the bar...I felt it was just the thing Vegeta would do. He is powerful, and to let people push him around is NOT in his nature.

Thankfully (?) Goku arrived, and saved those idiots from their own folly.

Now he is asking Vegeta to save him from his, and he is asking all the right questions, and addressing all the correct issues.

Hopefully he is fully prepared to face what Vegeta is going to tell him. The sheep and lion annalogy is perfect. How long has Goku forced himself to eat grass? O.o

I liked how his transformation made him see things in himself he was going to have to confront, because he could no longer let them slide.



YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!!!!! You write REAL sayains sooooo well!!!!

I love it, I love it, I LOVE IT! This is just a great and well-written story. I love Vegeta's down-to-earth style of speaking and just his blunt, cynical descriptions of everything. Is he getting sick, though? Memory loss and paleness...not good! Anyway, I love the Bulma/Vegeta relationship. I know we see a few of these scenes in the show, but you make it all yours. The perspective from Vegeta is a perfect touch and makes the story move nicely. And he's such a poet, Vegeta is. Your flowing style of writing makes Vegeta a character who is charming, hot, pleasing...and terrifying, too! I look forward to every chapter and I am excited to see how the story will turn out. As usual...absolutely great perfection. GREAT STUFF!

Well...after a couple of months of this site being down, I hadn't the chance to catch up on other people's stories...so I was surprised and insanely excited when I saw that many many more chapters have een included to this story. I just got done with chapter 26 and I must say...I LOVE IT!!!!!!!! I love the way you depicted Bulma and Vegeta's close, bonded relationship, especially at the Irish pub. Perfect. This whole chapter was sweet and awesome and ahhhhh,,,I can just go on and on. I loved it even more when Vegeta kissed Duncan. I don't know, I just loved it. And I absolutely adored...Bob. That was a perfect touch. I can tell that you had fun with chapter and I cannot wait to read more..so tht's what I'm going to do. Perfection as always. Great Great stuff!

I love this chapter. How Vegeta is doubting himself, and trying to prove to himself how much of a monster he can still be.


At this particular point (I am sure this is not the full focus of the story) this is one of the best pieces of V/B get together I have ever read. (including your own Dark Angel, which is still awesome by the way.)

Interesting take on Goku\'s detatchment with his family. I would have to say I totally agree with Vegeta\'s POV, and wonder why more people don\'t see it the same way.

hehehehehe, Vegeta thought Trunks had a crush on him. (And he probably does!)

So I read this whole story last night since I couldn\'t sleep anyway, and I\'ve got to tell you that I adore it. I really hope it doesn\'t end here because I wanna know what happened to Justin, and why Goku or whoever was following the good doctor around, and why the hell Vegeta killed Bulma! Thank you for writing something so lovely and sharing it with we unwashed masses, we are not worthy! Please keep writing! I can\'t stand the anticipation!

Ok...wow. I've finished chapter 19 and I must say that I have completely fallen in love with this story. Every time I finish a chapter I feel like crying from the sheer emotions Vegeta feels and the situations he and Zarbon go through. The way you described Love in this story is amazing. The story is written and is seen from a human who is unfamiliar with alien, saiyajin ways, and you make it all so clear to him and the readers. Vegeta is a character who was raised so confused, Zarbon explaining love as a bad thing, and Faraque explaining it as a needed thing in life. No wonder he was was so confused and messed up. I'm anxious to see what will happen next, but I know that a great work like this deserves patience and great writing. I look forward to reading more of your work, and again, wonderful story.

So far I've only read up to chapter six, and I must say that this story is excellent. You know I'm a huge Vegeta fan and this story has it all. I love stories about Vegeta's past, and the story line that goes along with why he's in the asylum is great. You've created this Dr.Taziel, who is a very deep-thinking, unique individual and made him seem real. I love how you described Vegeta and made his character so...real. The grammar and vocabulary in this story is great. Like I've said, I've only read up to chapter six and I'm anxious to find out why Vegeta doesn't leave the mental hospital and I can't wait to find out how Bulma was really killed. Great work, and I can't wait to read more.

Thanks for the update! This is just at the best part, the change over from the man he was to the man he is, from Faraque and Zarbon to Goku and Bulma. You know how much I love this so when AFF gets over the problems I'd love another post. It truly is beautiful and perfect story of love and loss. Thank-you for sharing it.

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