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for Saiyan Enlightenment

by CardDragonBall

person Multifaceunecune
schedule November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I just wanted to let you know how much I have enjoyed your stories so far. (I forgot to review MoP because I rushed off to read this one...heh...) This is a really neat idea, and you are doing a wonderful job! The descriptions and characters are very in depth and well written -- keep up the good work!!! *leaves to go start the sequel...yay!*
person Jasmine
schedule August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn, 39 chapters to go... I'll leave a real comment when I seem to finish up, and have the whole story in mind... Good job so far ^.~
person jaygoose
schedule July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Raditz...Raditz...Raditz! Hurray! I am so giddy...I love the big idiot. Ahh...and the lemon was so lemony fresh. :)
person SaiyajinNeko
schedule July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
IS HE MAD?!?! I think Vegeta also needs a smack round the head. ~Smacks Vegeta really hard~ Idiot, why the hell do you wanna bring back Raditsu? Poor Goku must be at his wits end. -_- And what will this do to Gohan, he will probebly not trust him even more. HELL!! Even i don\'t trust him right now. ~Growls~ What are you up to Card-san? lol. Ca wai wait till the next chap, Ja ne!
person Hecate18
schedule July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God!!!
I have now got a huge smile on my face... Raditz is coming back. ::faints::
Raditz just happens to be one of my favourite characters (Vegeta will always be no. 1 ^-^). Anyways just reviewing to congratulate u on a brilliant fic, I am definately looking forward to the sequel, any fic of yours is a brilliant read. ^_^

BTW liked the lemon... or part lemon ^.~
person SaiyajinNeko
schedule July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well....i don\'t know what to say...I\'m sorry i overreacted, i tend to do that when anything threatens Goku and Vegeta\'s relationship. ~Blushes~ I think you ahould give them all their tails back. ^_^ Can\'t wait till the sequel, i wonder what the title will be called. Ja ne!
person Elenek
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I feel so loved. You\'re bringing Radditz back. And you are doing so shortly after I told you that I missed him in AKWC. I know I had nothing to do with your decision; but I still feel loved. Yeah for my favorite villan!!!! Who\'s very Hot. With all that . A. And a smirk ... that\'s even more evil looking than Vegeta\'s. If Goku decides he doesn\'t want to share can I have Radditz? -El-
person Dr. Yaoi
schedule July 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yet another wonderful chapter. And it\'s filled with lemony goodness. I have yet another question. Out of all your stories which do you think is your best onnd wnd which did you have the most fun on? Thank you for updating! Keep up the good work! ^_^!!!
person Mechanical Butterfly
schedule July 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hehe...Vegeta is so mean leaving Goku in a cold shower...
That was a very good chappie and I loved that spanking part. I wish Goku did spank him.
Piccolo is such a great character I am glad he showed up.
And G/V are just so cute. I loved how Vegeta just went into the bedroom after Piccolo left to comfort him.
I loved when Goku said start my shower...and how that lead to the whole spanke me thing. I was nearly falling out of my seat.
I was like omgomgomgomgomg!!!!! Goku is going to spank him...hehe


yay I am glad that thre will be a sequel *cries joyful tears*
^.*
-MB-
person Macha
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the heads up! And, thanks for the lime before it happened. I like tension defusing limes. OH, and lemons, mus\'n\'t forget those.

I didn\'t think that Vegeta would go fhe bhe being spanked thing. I am glad he went with the \'get even\' tactic rather than the \'beat the shit out of him\' tactic.

I believe that Piccolo does have a radar of some sort. I think it has something to do with he use to be a part of Kami.

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