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for Saiyan Enlightenment

by CardDragonBall

person SaiyajinNeko
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Uhhh, ~hands you a plastic bag with your hair in~. Hehehe there you go ^_^; Try not to do that again it must hurt. Poor Krillin not being able to talk to Goku, he must feel sad....BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA like i care. *Ahem* Anyway a great chap, i just can\'t wait to see more nerviose Piccolo. And don\'t worry about not replying, everyone get busy now and again. ^_^ Can\'t wait till the next chap, Ja ne!
person macha
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy with how Goku\'s training is coming along. Look at that, he blew Krillin off so that he could go fight. *wipes tear from face* Makes me so proud.

I like the way you discribed how this fight felt a little different from all of he previous fights. Sure, he has always liked the fight, but somehow it means more now.

Certainly seems like they were both having fun knocking the shit out of eachother.
person angry monkey
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey- Vegeta may wear gloves, but he may not be prissy :) Motorcyclists wear gloves, but they don\'t get hounded by the animal rights people because rich ladies in fur are easier too beat up than big men in leather (and gloves)! Heh- Piccolo ate bad caulifour- next it\'ll be Mircale Gro thats past its best before date.
person Mechanical Butterfly
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Kakarot’s brat was the hentai. He probably would have sat here with Bulma and taken notes. --LoL

“Yes.” Best to keep his sentences short, just in case she got confused--rofl

“Without divulging any sort of details about the hot monkey sex?” she asked, “I hardly think so.”--what a hentai...she is a woman after my own heart. I would say the same thing if I was her.

“You never had sex outside with me. You said it was too public.”--lol this converstaion sounds like a lot of fun for Vegteta

And then she grinned. “Well, if you were outside in a public place, just what did he use to…” --LoL great transistion!

“Goku,” Piccolo said, “It was yesterday, not the other day.”--O_O! Well exxxcuuuuussssseee me Mr. drill sergeant perfectionsist have to have the days right green dude...sheesh ^_^

That always screwed him up (no pun intended.) --LoL

(who gave a day off to a psychotic saiyan-side with a taste for raunchy sex anyway?)--not me, that\'s for sure.

Vegeta came home he sniffed him. Just a little sniff. --aww that saiyajin side is coming out more and more..sniffing that is cute...but I suppose it could lead to deadly things if he sniffs something that he doesnt like.

“So you made me horny. When I had to tell her how you fucked me.” --that is so sweet and cute *dies*

Yummy lemon!!! I do hope that is not the end of it.

Vegeta: *sharpening kitchen knife with whetstone * Good plan--o.O! NO! she brings us good lemons!!!

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ch 19

So he pressed his cheek to Kakarot’s again--that is the kind of stuff that makes me die! I love that those little things or when they just kiss run fingers through hair. It is so small but it makes it seem so real.

Held there by hands on him, and he wiggled against them just so he would be restrained harder--I love that. Vegeta is so bad, but bad in a good way. He knows how to get what he wants.

Liked being able to turn Vegeta over and know that he wasn’t hurting him, just giving him what he wanted.--Good. I am glad he is learning this and understanding it too. See there is an upside to all of this stuff.

Used his free hand to wrap up in Vegeta’s hair, felt the t bla black strands in his fingers and that made him moan, he loved the feeling of Vegeta’s hair ---*dies* I absolutely love that it is beautfiul and I am totally convinced you are the Queen of Lemons...^.~

That lemon was ...amazing...*drools* Delicious! I must read it again...and I shall!!!!

and put his hand ontop of the one tracing his chest. --cuteness

Not that he was about to tell anyone, but Vegeta really liked it when people touched him.--awwwwww that is so adorable. I will touch him all he wants. I will touch him FOREVER!!!!!

“Mm-hmm,” Goku said. Nodded. Didn’t move to go and shower though and Vegeta didn’t either, just laid there, sprawled and comfortable as he was petted.--LoL

lmao at end notes

^.*
-MB-






person SaiyajinNeko
schedule June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hehehehehehe ^_^ ~Is laughing at your laugh~ You are funny. Thanks for doing the exstended sex scene, i am very happy now. ^^ Now all you need to do is tell whats up with Piccolo-san. ^_^ Heh. ~Smiles at content Veggie scene~ ^^ How cute. Can\'t wait till the next chap, Ja ne!
person EleneK
schedule June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Why was Piccolo blanching? There was someone else there wasn\'t there? Somebody that Piccolo did not want to have a conversation in front of . Am I right? I\'m not to sure I liked your spoiler. Do we have to bring him back into this one. Can\'t he just get over it in private. Is he gonna get the crap beat out of him? Torture? Torture? No? Damn.

-El-
person Webtester01
schedule June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Finally. Goku won\'t hold back.
person Mechanical Butterfly
schedule May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
He realized that Vegeta was too laid back at that moment to smack him upside his head properly and he exploited this weakness to sick, sick advantage. (It was the most Saiyan thing Kakarot did.)--LoL I love this! *cheers* Go Kakarot exploit away!

Detail? Bulma knew many details. She was a horrible hentai. A closet freak-- I knew she was!!!! and now I have proof!!!!

‘please don’t hurt me when I tell you what I’m going to tell you’ --awwwww that is so cute

“WHAT,” he said, calmly, he thought, “ABOUT US?!”--@_@!!! That does not sound calm, it sounds scary and loud! *covers ears* I knew Vegeta shouldn\'t have gone with the simple answer he should have just told Goku everythinghe was thinking and we wouldn\'t have arrived at this point...or maybe we would but at a later time. So I guess it doesnt matter....

(See? If he hadn’t had just had mind-blowing sex, he would have Kakarot tied to a tree right now, covered in honey with fire ants crawling towards him with evil intents.)--Lmao it\'s amazing to see what mindblowing sex can do..or stop you from doing.

Ah, Vegeta liked the Greenbean--hehe, I thought he might.

he was more than aware just what his tease of a boyfriend had done in the shower and that the smell was put there to make him insane.--LoL. evil boyfriend, torturing poor Trunks

“FINE. See if I care!” and then she packed up Bra and went shopping. Stress-induced shopping. --rofl! I have been a victim of stress induced shopping *sobs* The nightmares..the never ending horrors of what is purchased. It\'s enough to make one dress in the dark.

lmao at end notes

^.*
-MB-
person macha
schedule May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
See you\'ve made Bulma evil too. I mean if I were.....Oh no, you\'ve made me evil too! *reaches hands up to forehead* Aaaaaaah! *runs to find hathidehide deformity.*

Devoulging such things to Buis sis such a small price to pay for a new house. Oh, and I get to read the new details too. Such a great deat. Thank you, thank you, thank you! *bows to Card*
person SaiyajinNeko
schedule May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m so glad you desided to not be that evil. ^_^ Hehe Goku is becoming so funny with his Saiyan side, he even SNIFFED Veggie!! Hahaha. And Piccolo, whats wrong with him? Is he nervose about the info that he was told or what? Now you can\'t not carry on from where you left off, and noone is to interupt eather. ^_^ It must go ONNNNN!!! HEHE, sorry i\'m in a fumoodmood. Can\'t wait till the next chap, Ja ne!

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