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Thank goodness...I finally got up to speed on this one. Bless Piccolo, he is a savior. Poor Namek. I could just see him blushing. So cute. I am glad that Geta and Kaki finally got their shit together and got with the make up sex. Very good I might add. Goten and Trunks were sweet too. I love those two. Now Ioff off to bed...my eyes are tired. :)

Very short review ahead, (I have work tomorrow and 16 hours of sleep to make up for, *sighs* like thats gonna happen!)

Goku and Vegeta are ok... I think its time for a GROUP HUG!!! *looks for Vegeta*
They should have make up sex... technically they did have make up sex... but they should have more for good measure. ^.~

But Trunks and Goten had sex (or are in the process of ^-^) so its ok. Guess it was worth the wait for the two of them, Trunks didn\'t even blush! ^_^

Thank you for Beta\'ing my chap for me, I\'m gonna post it now befor'm o'm off to bed cause the only other free time I\'ve got is Tuesday! But thank you again! ^_^

::grabs Goku and whaps him upside the head:: \ loo look you stupid saiyan, the choice is this simple!\'
::drags Goku over to two doors:: \'Behind door number one - \'
::Stupid friends sitting around discussing crappy things and drinking tea. Gohan burtsing into tears:: \'Your stupid friends and your idiot son. Behind door number two - \'
::Opens door to reveal naked Vegeta tied to a bed and desperately horny:: \'Your Prince.\'
\'Now Goku, you have to choose... Goku? Um, Goku, where- oh.\'
::Closes door number two discreetly. Pauses, frowns, pulls videocamera out of nowhere, opens door, deposits videocamera, closes door discreetly. Gohan is watching over shoulder and bursts into tears again::
\'But daddy, how could y-\'
::gets poked in the eye by Sarkywoman\'s new metal claw that only cost her four pound at the market::
\'Right. My work here is done.\'

::grabs Goku and whaps him upside the head:: \'Now look you stupid saiyan, the choice is this simple!\'
::drags Goku over to two doors:: \'Behind door number one - \'
::Stupid friends sitting around discussing crappy things drindrinking tea. Gohan tingting into tears:: \'Your stupid friends and your idiot son. Behind door number two - \'
::Opens door to reveal naked Vegeta tied to a bed and desperately horny:: \'Your Prince.\'
\'Now Goku, you have to choose... Goku? Um, Goku, where- oh.\'
::Closes door number two discreetly. Pauses, frowns, pulls videocamera out of nowhere, opens door, deposits videocamera, closes door discreetly. Gohan is watching over shoulded bud bursts into tears again::
\'But daddy, how could y-\'
::gets poked in the eye by Sarkywoman\'s new metal claw that only cost fou four pound at the market::
\'Right. My work here is done.\'

Four times and counting. Just pointing out that when you delete one of those (and probably this one and the third) make sure you delete the first one, because I misspelt bursting on that one. Which is odd, since they\'re the same review... o_O

Y..y...your not updating tomorow?? WHYYYYYYYY??? ~Faints~ ......~Wakes up~ Oww, oh well i guess i can wait a FEW days. ~Sighs~ Deprived of Goku/Vegeta action, whats next? Very nice chap, Trunks didnt blush nearly as much which i thought was cute and funny. He\'s so despirate. And Goku told Veggie about telling Piccolo. Brave. I think its right to let Goku have someone to talk to about all this i mean all his other so called \'Friends\' abandoned him. Can\'t wait till the next chap, Ja ne!

It was really really good, until the part you just STOPPED. Not mad, just plain evil.

Alright. This chapter was good. I liked all of it, just wanted more, but of course, you already knew that.

I\'m glad that Piccolo\'s advice turned Goku\'s thinking around.

I liked the part where Vegeta thought that a sayian wouldn\'t give an hour long apology. That was funny.

Hahaha yes i supose i would be that pationt if the sex was that good aswell. ^_^ Hehe really jucy lemon this time, tis loveing every second. You know ive been thinking and i think that Piccolo should take on the job of couple counsaling those two, i\'m sure he\'d do a good job of it. And they wouldent fight so much then. Can\'t wait till the next chap, Ja ne!

I’m sorry, Vegeta. I shouldn’t have yelled at you and I feel really bad about it. And…I shouldn’t have left you like I did.” --*hugs Goku* That\'s the apology I have been waiting for. :)

“You were never one of them,” Vegeta replied.--and that within itself is very difficult. He may have never been one of them, but learning to become what he never knew he was has to be a hard thing to grasp.

“I know,” Kakarot said, and he said it with real purpose, with real understanding. He said it to affirm it, to kill off the rest of him that was human--I am impressed. Here I thought he may never feel like this.

moved forward and sat in the big idiot’s lap. --*dies*

Pointed out all the things that Goku already knew, and he had decided right there that this was more important that what a bunch of backstabbing friends thought of him.--Good, I am glad he finally decided this, finally understood that. Vegeta does care for him and he cares for Vegeta...and the jerks who oppose this do not really matter. And although there words may sting Goku...I believe Vegeta will always be there for him, to lean on..to be comforted or whatever. I just love this relationship. Very pleased that they overcame this...very proud of Goku also.

Had sat and watched Vegeta sleep and been increasingly saddened by the lack of his fingerprints on his mate’s body. But he understood. Because he’d left Vegeta all alone, and there was no way you would strut around wearing the marks of someone who abandoned you.--aww the word abandoned just makes that even more sad. And that is so cute that Goku watched him sleep and I am glad he came back. I knew he would...but I just can\'t help but to be happy about it. ^_^

He kissed Vegeta hard enough he took his breath away--I loved that.

Looked down at Vegeta, and smiled. Loved him. Really did.--*sobs happily* That is so beautiful

Vegeta laughed, just shortly, was watching him with sli eye eyes that glittered in amusement --that is so cute! damn you! you and your perfect lemons!!!!!!! oh I take it back I will not damn you...it is to wonderful...these lemons are flawless and I love them!

*Cackles like a mad man * MWHAHAHAHAHAHA!--you are cruel!

LoL at end notes

*Goku burst out into sobs * “I’m Sorry! I didn’t mean to hurt Vegeta!” *more sobbing *--Oh I forgive him, how can I not? When he watched Vegeta sleeping I forgave him..that melted me. So stop sobbing ya big baby! *pats Goku*

*author now pointedly ignoring the dirty comments about going down * Oh…look, no more review to respond to.--LMAO!!!!

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The fact that he wasn’t standing but sitting in the bottom of the tub. --*gasp* he can\'t even stand to take his shower...*shakes fist at Goku*

I loved how Bulma helped Vegeta out and even picked him up. That was so sweet of her.

And now that woman was all worried about him and if Kakarot heard that he had made Bulma worry than this stupid cycle of thoughts that had to be going on in the idiot’s head…--O.o Oh I hope Goku will be able to understand.

Hell, Vegeta had sex with Bulma, and Goku wasn’t knocking down her door to prove who Vegeta belonged to.--I am glad he is seeing it this way now. I loved how he described everything to Piccolo it was so cute and funny.

“You should trust him. He doesn’t want to hurt yo mak make you hurt someone else.”--Piccolo always has a wise word and is usually right. ^_^

and he really liked hanging out with Vegeta except for the past few weeks because they su a l a lot.--They did? A LOT you say? Where was I when this alleged sucking was going down? And I do mean going down...who was going down on whom..hm?

I hope all goes well....and I see Goku is still hating his saiyajin side. I wonder if that will ever change...

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