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Don\'t worry if you don\'t have time to reply, atleast you updated. ^_^ Tis goooood. At last Goku and Veggie get it on Saiyan style. ~Skips off into the distance wisteling happly~

whoa!...Oh yeah...I\'m leaving again for a few days. I can\'t wait to see what happens while I\'m gone.

And away the fool went, there came Kakarot, who was a lot fucking smarter than he liked to let on.--I love this. Rather sad but love the whole Kakarott/Goku thing. thought it was so cute when Goku was sitting with his hands on his lap *trying* to be as innocent as apple pie and a simple question could flick the switch to Kakarott...

What he had done to Kakarot, the one person in the whole of the universe that he thought would be safe from that sort of treatment --how emotional, and Vegeta really tried his hardest not to do that to Goku..and he failed...so sad.

People loved to laugh, after all, and there was nothing funnier than Kakarot being smart and Vegeta being emotional.--That is so sad, but it is true...and that is such a upsetting outlook to have. But really it seems that outlook was forced on them.

They were all necessaryfortfortunately, because until he figured out what in the hell Kakarot thought was so wrong about it, he couldn’t figure out how to help him. --He is so smart!

Then came a question that he wasn’t so sure he was going to answer with a great deal of honesty. “Who’d you do that with?”--LoL ...I hope Goku can handle the answer.

I really loved and enjoyed the conversation between Goku and Vegeta, again it was very emotional for me. I find their relationship very intense and real. Loved how Vegeta set Goku up with those questions of do you hate me..etc...thought that was a very good way to try and find out what is really bothering him. I can never tell you how much I enjoy reading this fic but it is A LOT! I think Vegeta is being a very very patient man in this fic not just with Goku but throughout this ordeal. Very impressed.

Maybe he could swap the babies without anyone noticing. (A joke, a Joke! He wasn’t really going to do it.) --LMAO!
baby swapping is no laughing matter!

He grinned. “About a day, actually.”
She shook her head. “I meant since you saw him.”--rofl what a hentai!

Anyway. You can’t review under a different name! That’s chng. ng. *nods affirmatively *--LoL you are correct and I would never do that anyway. ^_^

I loved this chapter...

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This was prabably the best chapter and best cliffy in the story so far. I couldn\'t stop reading this chapter. Poor Goku I would be so tired if I was him. Fighting both sides so vehemen He He needs a break. Take a break Kakarot. *smiles evilly*

*has flash back of Vegeta\'s mustach and grimaces and sqivers* Ugh!

0_0......................!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! I wanna know, i HAVE to know what happens next. Goku\'s going to let go, be Saiyan, do what ive been waiting for all this time. And you leave it there?? It trully is a crule and shameless world. ~Shakes her head~ Well brill chap, i felt all of what Goku was feeling, hehe. I wanted him to bring back Raditz and kick his ass again. ^_^ Well can\'t WAIT till the next chap, Ja ne!

Case in point for vocational school. I think that Sayian Enlightenment is a VERY necessary course/life study for Goku. Of course one of the majors of this life study happens to be lemons, more specific, sayain lemons. Regular education just doesn\'t seem to make lemons, of any sort, a priority.

So he was so concerned about doing it in the hallway, but is now walking around in a grassy field in nothing but a sheet. What a paradox. Then of course there is going to be a VERY interesting fight where Goku is most certainly going to lose his sheet. nks nks about Goku without his sheet* Nice image.

I am glad to see that he is determined to make Vegeta forget about Radditz.

Hehe, you tied them up. ^_^ Anyway i\'m just dieing about the situation. Will Veggie tell Goku, will Goku understand and whats gonna become of the relationship if it gose badly. This is killing me, i\'m so glad it Saturday tomorow so i know you\'ll be updating. ^_^; Can\'t wait till the next chap, Ja ne!

A whole chapter of nothing but lemon! YEah. *takes pom poms out, and is waving them madly* I waited until the chapter was over though. Goad aad a difficult enough time with the fact that it was in the hallway, I didn\'t need him to know that someone was watching.

Oh no. What a dreaded queston. I am glad that they talked about most of it before it got to that questoion.

Goten is very cute with the baby. I like their understanding, I hope it continues to work so well.

That wasn\'t very nice of Goten, to go diving onto the bed. *laughs anyway*

Whoa...I might have really messed up the order this time. I loved the little cliffies in this chapter. I might be the only one though. Poor Goku he totally missed his right of passage.

Little Bra must be adorable. But I figured that Pan would be unreasonable. Have you seen her in GT, she\'s a little bitch. I hate her.