rate_review Reviews

The last chap was… yum, your lemon scenes are so descriptive and emotional which is a very rare trait. ^_^

I was thinking along the same lines as Vegeta, but poor Goku’s so confused, ‘“I didn’t want to hurt you, Vegeta.”’ – Its actually really cute. ^-^

And know the Raditz subject has popped up! O_O

Goten is so lucky, ‘She didn’t cry and he didn’t bitch about her.’ – doesn’t everyone wish they had that sort of relationship with babies.

A sandwich is a very serious thing to consider, especially when choosing one to buy… (having a half an hour lunch break just isn’t enough! U_U)

‘He grinned. “About a day, actually.”’ – I liked that, I was thinking the same as Bulma, i t did sound very naughty (has nothing at all to do with my hentai mind ^.~)

Like I said before take your time on beta’ing the chap, I’ve hardly got time to read fics let alone type them *crys*.

*Yawns* I’m off to bed, I have finally finished my work: I looked the deadline in the eye and laughed (while giving in my work of course)… Ok maybe I didn’t laugh I just threw my work at them then dashed home before they could give me more. *laughs manically then falls asleep* X_X

Another great chapter. (Chapter nine.)

The last two phrases were especialy funny. LOL

These last 2 chaps were so good!
And Piccolo and all the greeness was hilarious.
But I am now worried about Goku, he is doing all this training and if he continues he will never reach his saiyajin goals, although he doesn\'t want to. Boy when he is determined not to do something he is really determined.
And I think Vegeta has a right to be angry...but I fear what is going to happen in that hallway.
And when Goku thought he should just end the fight by slamming Geta\'s head into the wall to show whose stronger...hehe I loved that, but he should of done it because now I araidraid!!!!!
I don\'t want bad stuff to happen. *is worried* I hope Goku can over power him...maybe this will awaken the saiyajin side in goku...or maybe it will awaken something else...I dunno...guess I have to wait and find out.
Anyway I loved it sooooo much, and end notes were great!
^.*
-MB-

How dare he waste Vegeta’s time. Didn’t he have any fucking clue how important it was to train your natural impulses? --exactly! How dare Goku waste the Ouji\'s time. but he is afraid of his saiyajin side, heck I\'m terrified of his saiyajin side.

Pressed two of his bare fingers against Kakarot’s mouth, felt the lips part and he grinned, felt the mouth close around his fingers and teeth dug into them as Kakarot sucked....--I am not sure if I should be very scared, turned on, or just die...but I can tell you I am feeling all three.

Felt rangrange sense of déjà vu that almost made him sick and wondered where the tail was, remembered doing this before and there had been a tail wrapped around the prone back, had to blink, forget the past --wow, I wonder why this etingting Vegeta in such a way. I mean I understand why...it\'s just amazing that it is getting to him. He really does have a heart...awww

Uncurled his hands, and when Goku lifted his head and looked over his shoulder, he found that Vegeta was just looking at his back like he couldn’t figure out who he was. --that makes me sad

Now it was stilled, now Vegeta was thinking and he groaned. Thinking just hurt people. --I love that..shows how complicated everything truly is. This fic makes me truly sad...and to see these two saiyajins both struggling trying to achieve goals..opposite goals. One to make the other more saiayajin, and the other trying to deny reject that side of him.

“Kakarot,” Vegeta said, leaned down, over him, shifted and pressed against his prostate without even meaning to. “Am I hurting you?”-- *wipes tears away* That is really nice of him...and his thoughts really must have got the better of him. And I just loved that...Vegeta asking if he was hurting him that means a lot.

so Vegeta curled his hand tighter around his hip, held him still --that was so sweet

the end notes were so cute!!!!

Yeah I am very worried and curious about what Vegeta is going to say when Goku wakes up.

Also, I have to point out that it’s just a little weird how all of the stories have Macha, Webtester 01 and Mechanical Butterfly reviewing in that order. Weird!~~~~~~~ ;)--lmao that is weird..it\'s b/c we are one in the same..yes that\'s it!
*sighs* actually no were not...*shifty eyes* or are we? MWHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!! *runs off to type up a review as Macha*

^.*
-MB-

~Pats you on the back~ hehehe. Really nice lemon, i was kinda worrid for a second when Vegeta was thinking about how there was suposta be a tail. o_0; Well can\'t wait till the next chap, Ja ne!

Just to mess up the \'normal\' order of your reviewers... Here I Am!!

Now that Goku has experienced \'the Saiyan approach\' - I think he\'ll be more willing to let his instincts rule and pin Vegeta down and take him without fear for how Vegeta will feel... because he now knows that Vegeta is gonna feel GREAT!

Countdown to last day of school: 5 days

Ginia

Oh well. Maybe if I get to the computer earlier next time I\'ll be able to mess up the \'normal\' order of reviews.... at least I tried.

Oh Yeah. I feel wrong after readihat hat one...like I was right there watching this wonderfulness happen. Good job!

Felt a strange sense of déjà vu that almost made him sick and wondered where the tail was... Hmmm.
Interesting. I wonder if they get their tails back. He must have been thinking of Raditz.

Loved the whole chapter.

I keep getting that line 11 thing and then \"Anon\" shows up. ARRG!