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May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh...the plot thickens! So that\'s what Goku has been up to. I wonder why it took Princy so long to notice? Anywho, do I see a preditory lemon on the horizon?
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May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I only have one thing to say.........
..........*smirks*........enough said.
..........*smirks*........enough said.
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May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
~Watches your jittery self~ Don\'t worry i wont go anywhere.^_^; I just wont have much to say. Anyway, i wonder what got into Vegeta, one minute i thought he was going to have a go at Goku and the next....well you know. ^^\' Hmmm i wish they would just come out and say whats on their mind, thats what i\'d do. But then again i\'m not Saiyan. Well look forward to the next chap, Ja ne!!
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May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*finishing off lasagna* Nope that is definitely not better than sex...better than a ham sandwich, but definitly not better than sex. This lemonade is pretty good though. Refreshing. Anywho, at least Trunks and Goten got to bang.
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May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lol, Trunks blushes to much, hehehehe. So funny. Nice little bit of Trunks and Goten there, very amusing. I really find it hard to come up with any thing to say in the reviews. I\'m not use to people updating thier storys everyday, its cool and strange at the same time. I\'m still trying to get use to it, don\'t get me wrong i love that you do, it just leaves me with nothing much to say. Anyway can\'t wait till the next chap, Ja ne!
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May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Drum rolls* I back! (plz excuse the very late short review, I\'m taking a little break from all my \'hard work\')
Bra is finally born *Whoops* Poor Trunks, baby\'s are very messy.
I certainly hope Vegeta doesn\'t tell Bra what(who ^_~) he was doing on her birth date.
The lemon with Trunks and Goten was very yummy, \'“Is it New Years yet?”\' - I loved that! ^_^
Anyways off to bed... I mean work *stares longingly at bed*
Bra is finally born *Whoops* Poor Trunks, baby\'s are very messy.
I certainly hope Vegeta doesn\'t tell Bra what(who ^_~) he was doing on her birth date.
The lemon with Trunks and Goten was very yummy, \'“Is it New Years yet?”\' - I loved that! ^_^
Anyways off to bed... I mean work *stares longingly at bed*
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May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nah, I don\'t think Vegeta wants a dominate Goku; I think he wants more of a \"mental-equal\"... well, maybe not mental ;P) , but more of an equal-ized partner/lover/mate than just a submissive. Carry on, carry on! =)
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May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, that Goku has something similar to a glass jaw, or Akili\'s heel. I know that if I were Vegeta, I would be exploiting it. It was awfully nice of Vegeta to let them get a meal first, though.
Happy New Years! Prissy Trunks *snickers* yah, prissy. Still hot though.
Happy New Years! Prissy Trunks *snickers* yah, prissy. Still hot though.
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May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
chapter 6
‘Oh, I stayed right next to your crib until I choked on how cute you were.’--lmao what a sweet lie
Smirked when Kakarot grabbed the headboard and almost broke it. “Better?” he asked.--O_O I think I broke the keyboard because I just...DIED!!!! This lemon is so delicious and it fits the mood just right b/c I am eating lemon chicken lucky me...or unlucky me b/c I am reading a lemon and eating a lemon chicken not getting any lemons of my own...hehe oh well I love reading this!
Ok wow an uninteruppted lemon in which I died more than once...very nice...thank you
Because he really did love Vegeta, and he knew what the Saiyan side of him liked, knew what it was hungry for and he wasn’t about to give in and let it have what it wanted.--wow that is ise, se, and so very scary. I wonder if he can control his saiyajin side, not give in to it...that thought worries me...
lmao loved the end notes!
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‘Oh, I stayed right next to your crib until I choked on how cute you were.’--lmao what a sweet lie
Smirked when Kakarot grabbed the headboard and almost broke it. “Better?” he asked.--O_O I think I broke the keyboard because I just...DIED!!!! This lemon is so delicious and it fits the mood just right b/c I am eating lemon chicken lucky me...or unlucky me b/c I am reading a lemon and eating a lemon chicken not getting any lemons of my own...hehe oh well I love reading this!
Ok wow an uninteruppted lemon in which I died more than once...very nice...thank you
Because he really did love Vegeta, and he knew what the Saiyan side of him liked, knew what it was hungry for and he wasn’t about to give in and let it have what it wanted.--wow that is ise, se, and so very scary. I wonder if he can control his saiyajin side, not give in to it...that thought worries me...
lmao loved the end notes!
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May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7
“I am NEVER having children,” he said. Looked at Goten, who was sitting on his bed in his boxers, and upon Trunks’ statement lifted the waist band of his shorts and looked inside.
“Well, than it’s a good thing I can’t give you any.” --ROFL! Aww poor Trunks and Goten hilarious as always.
If she ever went from ‘that’ to ‘his sister’ he would die of shock.--lmao, well I will be ready with the death certificate when that change happens b/c it is bound too..hehe...
He just wanted Gohan to leave Vegeta alone. To stop repeating that stupid question ‘How could you’ like a mantra in his mind until Goku was deaf from the stupidity of that question.--Loved this line so much. It seems as though Gohan hasn\'t bothered them in awhile I do fear what would happen if they did run into each other or just confront each other. I think it is good Goku doesn\'t want to fight his own son that is what makes him, him. But if Vegeta was in his place I honestly dont think Vegeta would fight his son either. *shrugs* I dunno that is just my belief. And that question of Gohans (how could you) Seems to definately be eating away at Goku\'s thoughts....how frustrating and annoying that can be.
Because that’s all it was. Gohan was just upset because Vegeta wasn’t a girl. --I always believed that was what was truly bothering the demi saiyajin. That is so sad...to bad Gohan can not see past this fact. Ignorance has blinded him, preventing him to have a relationship with his father... Really it is very sad (I do not mean sad like I am crying, but sad like pathetic) to know it effects him that greatly he won\'t budge in his decisions I truly hate Gohan in this fic.
And that was truly stupid.--glad he thought that b/c that is exactly waht it is, truly stupid.
Another wonderful chapter and the end fight it getting terribly exciting...I can hardly wait to see what is going to happen...
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“I am NEVER having children,” he said. Looked at Goten, who was sitting on his bed in his boxers, and upon Trunks’ statement lifted the waist band of his shorts and looked inside.
“Well, than it’s a good thing I can’t give you any.” --ROFL! Aww poor Trunks and Goten hilarious as always.
If she ever went from ‘that’ to ‘his sister’ he would die of shock.--lmao, well I will be ready with the death certificate when that change happens b/c it is bound too..hehe...
He just wanted Gohan to leave Vegeta alone. To stop repeating that stupid question ‘How could you’ like a mantra in his mind until Goku was deaf from the stupidity of that question.--Loved this line so much. It seems as though Gohan hasn\'t bothered them in awhile I do fear what would happen if they did run into each other or just confront each other. I think it is good Goku doesn\'t want to fight his own son that is what makes him, him. But if Vegeta was in his place I honestly dont think Vegeta would fight his son either. *shrugs* I dunno that is just my belief. And that question of Gohans (how could you) Seems to definately be eating away at Goku\'s thoughts....how frustrating and annoying that can be.
Because that’s all it was. Gohan was just upset because Vegeta wasn’t a girl. --I always believed that was what was truly bothering the demi saiyajin. That is so sad...to bad Gohan can not see past this fact. Ignorance has blinded him, preventing him to have a relationship with his father... Really it is very sad (I do not mean sad like I am crying, but sad like pathetic) to know it effects him that greatly he won\'t budge in his decisions I truly hate Gohan in this fic.
And that was truly stupid.--glad he thought that b/c that is exactly waht it is, truly stupid.
Another wonderful chapter and the end fight it getting terribly exciting...I can hardly wait to see what is going to happen...
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