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May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow...I loves me and good fight. Poor Goku, what Gohan said is really bothering him.
I feel for Trunks though, I had to gooughough the same things when my brother was a baby. I don\'t recall having to throw away that many shirts though.
I feel for Trunks though, I had to gooughough the same things when my brother was a baby. I don\'t recall having to throw away that many shirts though.
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May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ouuuh, it\'s getting closer, isn\'t it? Blacking out during the fight seems like Goku is letting his insticts take more control. Will he ever be able to work WITH his insticts, instead of just blacking out? Dominating Vegeta wouldn\'t be all that much fun if he couldn\'t remember what he had done in the morning. (or maybe I just have a strange sense of fun?)
Trunks not wanting to have babies? What\'s he thinking? Is Bra really a poop machine, or does he just not know how to change a cubs diaper?
Bulma\'s timing was FUNNY.
Trunks not wanting to have babies? What\'s he thinking? Is Bra really a poop machine, or does he just not know how to change a cubs diaper?
Bulma\'s timing was FUNNY.
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May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*gasp* Goku wasn\'t thinking of sex??? *facefaults* I never thought I\'d see that day. more!
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May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3
Reading this was somehwat depressing...but not in a bad way.
I felt very sad. Especially when reading from Goku\'s POV it is so interesting.
Just how he feels and what he is going through, how truly hard this is for him.
He did not want to make people bleed, he did not want to feel Vegeta struggling for his freedom under him he didn’t want to use his mate that way and he absolutely refused to do it. --very emotional...written so well. You really are wonderful at capturing the essence of emotion. This fic just ...ugh...it is so heart wrenching. I love it.
The truth was, he didn’t know. He had no idea if he controlled it or somehow, but never being part of him, it controlled him.--that is a scary thought.
“Now its time to figure out if you can handle yourself. There is nothing you have ever done that makes you a bad Saiyan.” --that made me smile. This relnshinship is beautiful..and is probably on of the best portrayals of a yaoi v/g relationship that I have ever read. I love how Vegeta continues to support Goku and vice versa it\'s just real. I love how neither one of them run away and hide from each other or their feelings...but instead this fic deals with something on a whole other level...real problems, a real relationship...and the task at hand (Goku struggling with his saiyajin side) is just great to read about.
Because this problem wasn\'t solved in 3 chapters...it is an actual struggle and you go in depth when it is Goku\'s POV...just excellent...
This fic drives me insane and I try to save this one for last when I read fics b/c I love it soo much this one and the one before it The Meaning of Pride.
So far, their tiontionship had withstood every stone thrown at it, but Goku wasn’t sure if it would survive this. Knew that if it did, than it was forever. --I honestly think it can...but then again I am not the writer. I just think this relationship is unbreakable. But in the instance that I am wrong and itaks aks that should be very heartbreaking and interesting to read about.
Goku ran his fingers across those scars, ran them down his chest, over his stomach, wrapped his fingers around the erection, watched Vegeta look at him. Watched the way he didn’t say anything but he trusted him. Really did. And it was painful to know that, and to realize that Goku didn’t even trust himself. --wow, I loved that..love how comfotable they are with each other. And to know Vegeta trusts him but he doesn\'t even trust himself, that is a powerful statement...and gosh *shakes fist at you* I just can not believe how much I love this. It make me all watery eyed...
Vegeta: MoP Chapter 18.--LMAO!!!
Beautiful chapter....
I am off to read the others...
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Reading this was somehwat depressing...but not in a bad way.
I felt very sad. Especially when reading from Goku\'s POV it is so interesting.
Just how he feels and what he is going through, how truly hard this is for him.
He did not want to make people bleed, he did not want to feel Vegeta struggling for his freedom under him he didn’t want to use his mate that way and he absolutely refused to do it. --very emotional...written so well. You really are wonderful at capturing the essence of emotion. This fic just ...ugh...it is so heart wrenching. I love it.
The truth was, he didn’t know. He had no idea if he controlled it or somehow, but never being part of him, it controlled him.--that is a scary thought.
“Now its time to figure out if you can handle yourself. There is nothing you have ever done that makes you a bad Saiyan.” --that made me smile. This relnshinship is beautiful..and is probably on of the best portrayals of a yaoi v/g relationship that I have ever read. I love how Vegeta continues to support Goku and vice versa it\'s just real. I love how neither one of them run away and hide from each other or their feelings...but instead this fic deals with something on a whole other level...real problems, a real relationship...and the task at hand (Goku struggling with his saiyajin side) is just great to read about.
Because this problem wasn\'t solved in 3 chapters...it is an actual struggle and you go in depth when it is Goku\'s POV...just excellent...
This fic drives me insane and I try to save this one for last when I read fics b/c I love it soo much this one and the one before it The Meaning of Pride.
So far, their tiontionship had withstood every stone thrown at it, but Goku wasn’t sure if it would survive this. Knew that if it did, than it was forever. --I honestly think it can...but then again I am not the writer. I just think this relationship is unbreakable. But in the instance that I am wrong and itaks aks that should be very heartbreaking and interesting to read about.
Goku ran his fingers across those scars, ran them down his chest, over his stomach, wrapped his fingers around the erection, watched Vegeta look at him. Watched the way he didn’t say anything but he trusted him. Really did. And it was painful to know that, and to realize that Goku didn’t even trust himself. --wow, I loved that..love how comfotable they are with each other. And to know Vegeta trusts him but he doesn\'t even trust himself, that is a powerful statement...and gosh *shakes fist at you* I just can not believe how much I love this. It make me all watery eyed...
Vegeta: MoP Chapter 18.--LMAO!!!
Beautiful chapter....
I am off to read the others...
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May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow....GO GOKU!!! ^_^ Bring out the Saiyan in you. Really cool chapter. Oh and my computer seems to be working better now but i\'m still gonna have it looked at just incase. As usual i can\'t find and thing really to say about the chapter since you always do them so well i\'m at a loss for words. lol. But i can\'t wait till the next chap, i\'m practicly bouncing off the walls for it, i wanna know whats gonna happen next. Well gotta go, Ja ne!
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May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More!More! More!
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May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4
Realized that he probably should have realized Kakarot would revert right back to his ‘help me I’m confused’ behaviors like he had right after his wife had died. --You know that is sad but I cn\'tn\'t help but laugh thinking of him sitting out there in his nest.
“I think I would,” Kakarot said, “Don’t let me, Vegeta. No matter what you have to do. Don’t ever let me do that.” --again..it just makes me so sad. I feel so badly for him and his struggle with this. But I am glad that he doesn\'t want to hurt the Prince.
“Kakarot,” Vegeta said, “You could have allowed me to get a shirt.” --LoL
“Oh,” his lover said, “Sorry ‘Geta. Here take mine.” Then he stripped off his shirt and pulled it on over Vegeta’s head before he could say anything. “There you go.”--GAH!!! *falls over dying of laughter* Goku is crazy!!!! But that is just too cute! Especially Vegeta in that big shirt!
Stopped stock-still at the newcomers that hadn’t checked in at the desk and stared quite blatantly at Kakarot who was just there, showing off how muscular and attractive he was. --ROFL!!!
Which was adorable. Which is the way it better stay because if he found out that Kakarot was having lecherous thoughts about anyone but him, than Vegeta would kill him.--LMAO!!! That is soooo cute!
“Dad, I think it would be best if you went and finished getting dressed. If another girl comes in here and gawks at you I think Vegeta is going to start killing them.” -- O_O LoL yeah that would be a good idea to get dressed...we dont want any dead nurses...or do we????? Got Goten was still talking (at this point, Goku had to wonder if somehow Goten had gotten female genes that allowed him to talk for many, many hours without having to breath.) --Lmao poor Goku having to listen ll tll that talking...
and the end notes were hilarious!
Another wonderful chapter!
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Realized that he probably should have realized Kakarot would revert right back to his ‘help me I’m confused’ behaviors like he had right after his wife had died. --You know that is sad but I cn\'tn\'t help but laugh thinking of him sitting out there in his nest.
“I think I would,” Kakarot said, “Don’t let me, Vegeta. No matter what you have to do. Don’t ever let me do that.” --again..it just makes me so sad. I feel so badly for him and his struggle with this. But I am glad that he doesn\'t want to hurt the Prince.
“Kakarot,” Vegeta said, “You could have allowed me to get a shirt.” --LoL
“Oh,” his lover said, “Sorry ‘Geta. Here take mine.” Then he stripped off his shirt and pulled it on over Vegeta’s head before he could say anything. “There you go.”--GAH!!! *falls over dying of laughter* Goku is crazy!!!! But that is just too cute! Especially Vegeta in that big shirt!
Stopped stock-still at the newcomers that hadn’t checked in at the desk and stared quite blatantly at Kakarot who was just there, showing off how muscular and attractive he was. --ROFL!!!
Which was adorable. Which is the way it better stay because if he found out that Kakarot was having lecherous thoughts about anyone but him, than Vegeta would kill him.--LMAO!!! That is soooo cute!
“Dad, I think it would be best if you went and finished getting dressed. If another girl comes in here and gawks at you I think Vegeta is going to start killing them.” -- O_O LoL yeah that would be a good idea to get dressed...we dont want any dead nurses...or do we????? Got Goten was still talking (at this point, Goku had to wonder if somehow Goten had gotten female genes that allowed him to talk for many, many hours without having to breath.) --Lmao poor Goku having to listen ll tll that talking...
and the end notes were hilarious!
Another wonderful chapter!
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May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5
I am glad that little Bra is finally born. ^_^
He was not a fan of hammocks, so he stayed standing, --thats good..neither am I..hehe
Dress in drag and dance the Macarena, he thought dryly-- LMAO!!!!! help..me...I almost died when I read that, I felt my heart giving out! Warn me before you write things like that!!!!! ^.~
It tasted too good for him to eat it prettily. --LoL, didn\'t I tell you to warn me!!!! j/k
(Especially since that fucking nurse kept coming in and pouting about how Kakarot had disappeared.) --aww *blasts nurse* there she is dead now no more worries... except..pearpears in nurse uniform and gawks at Goku*
But for the most part, he had spent the whole day as himself, as the Goku he remembered. --There goes that tinge of sadness through me. I hope he can always feel like the Goku he remembers even if he unlocks that saiyajin side fully.
Spoiled and pushy. (Not that Goku had any problems with him remaining that way. He rather liked Vegeta being all Prince like.) --I like it too, it is adorable.
Found that Vegeta was using his shirt to clean off his hands and face and knew that if it had been Vegeta’s own shirt that he was wearing it would never have been used for this purpose. --ROFL!!! That is so rude! But it presents and intresting point...his clothes are not worthy of grease or maybe Goku\'s clothes ARE worthy of sPrinPrincely grime...yes that must be it....hehe ^_^
loose ones, which meant this was part of Vegeta’s plan the whole time—aww what a nice plan...*sobs* but where is the rest o fitj/k j/k
Ah. Not only do I miss a day… But I tease you too.--yes you do!
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I am glad that little Bra is finally born. ^_^
He was not a fan of hammocks, so he stayed standing, --thats good..neither am I..hehe
Dress in drag and dance the Macarena, he thought dryly-- LMAO!!!!! help..me...I almost died when I read that, I felt my heart giving out! Warn me before you write things like that!!!!! ^.~
It tasted too good for him to eat it prettily. --LoL, didn\'t I tell you to warn me!!!! j/k
(Especially since that fucking nurse kept coming in and pouting about how Kakarot had disappeared.) --aww *blasts nurse* there she is dead now no more worries... except..pearpears in nurse uniform and gawks at Goku*
But for the most part, he had spent the whole day as himself, as the Goku he remembered. --There goes that tinge of sadness through me. I hope he can always feel like the Goku he remembers even if he unlocks that saiyajin side fully.
Spoiled and pushy. (Not that Goku had any problems with him remaining that way. He rather liked Vegeta being all Prince like.) --I like it too, it is adorable.
Found that Vegeta was using his shirt to clean off his hands and face and knew that if it had been Vegeta’s own shirt that he was wearing it would never have been used for this purpose. --ROFL!!! That is so rude! But it presents and intresting point...his clothes are not worthy of grease or maybe Goku\'s clothes ARE worthy of sPrinPrincely grime...yes that must be it....hehe ^_^
loose ones, which meant this was part of Vegeta’s plan the whole time—aww what a nice plan...*sobs* but where is the rest o fitj/k j/k
Ah. Not only do I miss a day… But I tease you too.--yes you do!
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May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*smirks* I showed up, but they didn\'t see me watching! Nice lemon.
Seems as though Vegeta wants to hurry this process along. *thinks for a moment* Can\'t say as I blame him. *drools thinking about a dominating Goku*
*tries to shake self out of thoughts*
Sorry, can\'t help it.
*still drooling*
Seems as though Vegeta wants to hurry this process along. *thinks for a moment* Can\'t say as I blame him. *drools thinking about a dominating Goku*
*tries to shake self out of thoughts*
Sorry, can\'t help it.
*still drooling*
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May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
~Kicks the computer~ \"And if you ever do that again i\'ll do worse\". ^_^ Well its working now, hopefully it will for a few more days. It needs a look at by our own prefesiocompcomputer exspert. LOL acturly he\'s a friend who offers to help us with the computer if we need it. Anyway to the chapter, very nice chap, wonderfull lemon and great Vegeta thoughts about Bra and what he would tell her if she asked what he did on day day she was born. ^_^ Very nice. Well can\'t wait till the next chap,
Ja ne!
Ja ne!