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Oww....Oww...Oww! That was really nice! I can appriciate Goku\'s concern though, Vegeta was being very mean. Waving his \'happy time\' in his face like that and then snatching it away. Bad Geta! Anywho, Goku does have the wierdest timing...\"So what\'s her name?\" you don\'t mention a man\'s new born daughter right after he\'s fucked you silly. But oddly enough Goku makes it seem effortless. Gotta love that Goku.

Well, that was a very nice chapter. Have I ever told you that I love the way you write. You have a wierd way of sliding in small details that don\'t make the chapters seem over stuffed. Did that make sense. Hmm...Anyway, I like the way Goku thinks...especially when he thinks about Vegeta. It\'s so cute.

And yes, I did mean fan fic writing. :)

Ok i\'m frustrated and ive tried reviewing this chapter to many times alread. Stuid screwy computer. Since this is taking so long i can\'t really say much exsept that this was a good chap and its nice to see Bra entering the world. ^_^ Well gotta go, Ja ne!

Yes! Angst and babies...er baby. My favorite comb am am so tired. So much more reading and writing to do. Sorry for the short review. *waves and runs off*

The door opened and a nurse came in, all-cheerful and ‘Hello, I have only air in my head’ like. Stopped stock-still at the newcomers that hadn’t checked in at the desk and stared quite blatantly at Kakarot who was just there, showing off how muscular and attractive he was.

“HELLO!” Bulma shouted. “PREGNANT WOMAN IN LABOR HERE!”

Turseurse snapped out of her little trance (which was good because Vegeta was going to smack her and his mate for not smacking her sooner) and went back to the cheerful little grin. Went over to Bulma’s side, looked at the print out of the heartbeats and patted Bulma happily. “You’re doing fine dear.” She scooted back out of the room, pausing a moment to look at Kakarot once more, and then departed with a giggle. ROFL

It seems we think alike. Anyway I just ejoy reading your stories.

Sorry I didn\'t revew every chapter, but I get rather busy sometimes.

mini angst fest? You are too funny! Poor Kakarot, next thing you know, he\'ll drag Goten fishing or hunting. Ah! Could you imagine Goten attempting to hunt... anything? Besides Trunks, that is! Or better yet, Vegeta could accidentally overhear Trunks and Goten talking about the effects of ecstasy on their love life and decide to try it out on Kakarot right before their next spar... THAT would cure Kaky of his inhibited Saiyan instinct, or rather, his contoverover it. J/k, j/k!!! Either way, ENCORE ENCORE! =)

Ah, how Kawaii, Goku built himself a nest. Why didn\'t Vegeta want to go in it? (j/k)

Baby is on the way, yeah!

I can\'t say as I blame the nurses. I think that there would have been a similar reaction if it had been Vegeta half nake also. That had to have been a funny site to see. Vegeta in Goku\'s big orange shirt.

Just pretend that 9 months has passed, i agree that it hasent been long enough really, but hey who cares anything can happen in anime. ^_^ Can\'t beleve Goten talks as much as a rambaling woman,lol. And Vegeta can\'t really blame those ladys from looking, is is one sexy Saiyan that deserves to be Appreciated. ^_^; Well can\'t wait till the next chap,Ja ne!

Dunno if you noticed, or even if Vegeta noticed, but Vegeta referred to Goku as his \'lover\' earlier. Dunno if that has any significance. But hey, nice angsty blow job going on there! And just forget about Bulma. Subplots can easily be squished into nothingness ::Sarkywoman runs over Bulma with steamroller:: See?

One more thing. \"fight lold old women\" - I just got this mental image oku aku and Vegeta hitting each other with handbags.