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I have finally caught up!!!
Took me about two days but I have. ::dances:: ^_^

The only prob is that its 2.30 in the morning and I need to be up on time for my driving lesson. ::note to self... \'do not attempt to drive when tired\'::
Your fic made me stay up late, but it was well worth it!

It was definitely \'refreshing\' reading a lemon/lime after all that angst, but the lemon between Goten and Trunks was kinda angsty/lemony which is good too!

Poor Goku, having to take a cold shower, I wouldn\'t put it past Vegeta to plan that! Perhaps Goku should spank him... ::ponders spanking:: ...kinky! ^.~

I am certainly looking forward to the next chap, I am hoping this time I\'ll keep on track, of all the chaps ...

Great chapter.

If I remember correctly, Goku and Vegeta lived in a capsule house.

And with all of Capsul Corp\'s technology, I would expecte them to have some kind

of tankless water hearter. The ones that heat the water as it flows through the pipes.

They are far more effcient than the ones with a tank (you save money on your gas/electric bill,)

and you nevun oun out of hot water. Also you don\'t have to worry about the bottom of the tank rusting

and falling out the bottom getting water everywhere.

Anyway enough technobabble. I\'m glad that Vegeta comforted Goku when he was in emotional distress.

I\'m still working on chapter thirteen (Mental block) so I hope to complete it soon

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O_O Ahhh no Goku needs to follow Vegeta and make him beg for it!!! Evil man, how dare he do such a thing. I was looking forward to some nlemolemon and he stopped and made Goku get all cold. ~Pouts~ No fair, i have a bad day coming up. ~Crys~ ^_^ Piccolo is so insightful, he is like their life sorce in a way. Everything would fall apart if it wasen\'t for him. Can\'t wait till the next chap as usual, Ja ne!

I would just like to say that I love your story. It\'s just so great. I originally wanted to say so much more but I guess I will just do some thing simple. *Kneels down and begans to bow down* I thank you oh great one for writing such beautiful yaoi. As a doctor i recommend more sex. Lots more. Also i have a very important question for you. If you saw Goku and Vegeta on a table having hot monkey sex and then on another table was a plate filled with small sandwiches and cheese what would you do? ^_^ Yay! Go you!

Well seeing that this is one of my favorite fics in the universe, I would totally hate to see it end. I would love to see this have a sequel, but only if you really want to. ^_~ I wouldn\'t want you writing something you didn\'t really want to write, that wouldn\'t be fun. But I love this fic so much and I just love the relationship of Goku and Vegeta and it is by far one of the best G/V reonshonships I have ever read about.

aww I think it\'s so great that Goku can concentrate. The part where he is looking at Bra just made me smile.
I think that is so rad that Goku and Vegeta may watch Bra...give Bulma a little time for herself.

OMG...that was sooooo sweet when Goku said that if they don\'t let Vegeta into heaven he will go with him to HFIL I died when I read that. I wasn\'t surprised though b/c he has said many times the the love he has for Vegeta was/is stronger and much different than the love as fas for ChiChi.

So that\'s what Vegeta has been writing! What Radditz and Nappa had taught him!

Ok wow, I can\'t believe how stupid Gohan is still being..although he does make some valid points...but he is still very very lame. I am very proud of Goku and how he held his own and didn\'t apologize and didn\'t get mad. yay Goku!

^_^ Trunks and Goten are so cute!!!!! Hehe..Trunks asking Goten what is it like...lmao thats\' how it all starts and then BAM before you know it you\'re uke!

Woo hoo! hot lemon!!! I loved it, it was soooooooo cute and yummay!
*hugs ficcie* I love it so much!
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HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE~ ~Is now fully awake and grining~ FINALY!!!! Trunks finaly got to be uke, i\'m glad about that. Now Goten can finaly have a nice easy dominating time when it happens. Gohan better be using this time to be thinking productevly, otherwise i will have to hit him on the head. ~Brings out her mallet to show she is seriose~ Well gotta go, thanks for the pillow ~Hands it back to you~ Can\'t wait till the next chap, Ja ne!

Well, I guess if he wanted to be with Goten when Goten\'s time came to be dominate it was probably better to experience uke this way than later.

Of course, I liked the chapter. I was a wonderful lemon. Goten was very nice and gental with a very nervous Trunks.


And you didn\'t smell plot when Vegeta thought something about Radditz possibly having a child somewhere? Well, okay, I guess I am still getting use to the different smells. Let me know when I should be smelling plot though, so I know what to look/sniff for.

Hmm. I think Trunks liked being uke in that moment.

Another great couple of chapters.

Sorry I missed you yesterday...I was off somewhere getting drunk. *shrugs* You know post summer midterm madness. Heh...heh...I played Soul Calibur 2 and lost. It was because I was drunk...really. Anyway, I would definitely read any sequel you decided to write. I love this stuff. Oh and \"The Trunks\' first time being uke\" lemon was amazing. Me likey.

Sorry for the late review, since Adultff.net was down and i had to go to bed when it came back on. -_- I hate living in the UK sometimes, stupid time difference. Anyway this was a nice chapter, i like how Goku feels content with everything at the moment. I wonder what Vegeta writes in that book of his, i\'m dying to know. Can\'t wait till the next chap, Ja ne!