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for Saiyan Enlightenment

by CardDragonBall

person macha
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I thought that I would inform you that even with all of the \'the\'s, you were still 10 words under the count. *smirks in evilness* I like the way you are able to manipulate the characters any way you want with the key board though. Impressive.

I like the word \'Arousal-inducing\'. (Can I use it? Huh, Huh?)

The thought of Goku going around \'dominating everything\' LOL. Can you just picture him with inatimate objects and all? *snickers quietly, it slowly gets louder as the possiblities keep popping into mind.* Yes, and Vegeta telling him...I have to leave this alone for my own sanity\'s sake.

\"Hey Goku! Stop with the thinking already. I\'m certain that Vegeta will just withhold sex if you do something wrong.\"

So, even Vegeta wants to find a balance somewhere in between Raging sayian and frail human for Goku can fit into. I guess that\'s alright, because even Goku wasn\'t certain that he wanted to be a raging sayian. *starts giggling again*

(*inches way back around tree* Okif yif your sure it\'s safe.)
person jaygoose
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahh...do I detect a bit of angst...me likey angst. Great start. I still think that Goten and Trunks are cute together.
person ma� �
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yah, another great lemon, and I am still have the Mike\'s to compliment it! It\'s good to see both of them shaushausted that they may talk about ideas, but not actually do them.

*catches hat* Oh, thank you. I could have used it this weekend, even if I didn\'t have these horns then. My poor nose is so sunburnt. The weather on Saturday was one of those days that was overcast, but you can still get a sunburn through the cloud cover. The camping was great. Thanks for asking.
person Ele� �
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see that both you and this site are back up. Are you feeling better?
person Sarkywom �
schedule March 8, 1920 at 12:00 AM
Oh hey I reviewed twice. But now I\'ve reviewed three times. That must be really annoying for you. Um...bye!

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